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Do Not Be Awed, For I Fear I May Have Killed A God.

Luna feels like her mane isn't as shiny, so she goes to get a potion to solve this problem. But when she gets the wrong one, she is reminded of a sin that still hovers over her head even after over 1,000 years.

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ComradeCheese

ComradeCheese #1 · Oct 28th, 2019 · · ·

Ok. It's actually pretty funny :) I don't see the reason for Luna to ask to be called Nightmare Moon but that's my only real peeve.
Really reminds me of Mane Attraction but cranked to 11.... Not too shabby overall but some details could use a light polish.

TehUltimmareFreakRobot

TehUltimmareFreakRobot #2 · Oct 28th, 2019 · · ·

Thank you for the compliment and advice! The whole Nightmare Moon thing was due to Luna feeling like since she didn't look like Luna, she didn't have Luna's name, only Nightmare Moon's, if that makes sense.