**This story is very old and not very good. It has since been cancled.**
Twilight Sparkle has been captured by an alien race that is set on controlling the universe.
Her captors are set on collecting the powers of her, and the hundreds of other captured aliens. If they succeed, Equestria and the whole universe will become slaves of these creatures.
However, there is a war being fought against them, a war that the "good guys" are quickly losing. That is until a miracle falls into their lap.
This story is heavily inspired by Knight Breeze's story; The Nautilus Protocol.
Chapters (15)
This story so reminds me of this old classic https://www.fimfiction.net/story/106624/the-nautilus-protocol
Sadly I don’t think it ever got finish and sort of lost it’s way in story after a while. What I mean is Twilight in that story was main star for a bit then Equestria came fast and Discord took over
I hope this story does well! Pretty simple and good so far
I still want to know when and how Twilight Sparkle got kidnapped by aliens. More importantly, I'm sure her friends and her subjects are all worried sick about her disappearance.
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It is inspired by it, I saw how it was never finished and decided to write my own take on the situation. My story will probably be similar to it for a little while, so I hoped you liked The Nautilus Protocol!
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I’m not sure if this was meant as a suggestion, but now I want to write a chapter of what is going on in Equestria during that time!
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What I'm saying is that I hope in the next chapter we'll get a flashback of how did Twilight get abducted by aliens.
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Alright, so Twilight has just disappeared... While we look for her who will take her place?
Don’t worry friends! I got it under control
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Good idea! When planning the storyline, I was going to add in a part where they explain a bit on how that happened, which shouldn’t be too unrealistic by looking at the royal guard....
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xD
Huh I wonder why this wasn’t in the update chapters
I think I notice it but did u replace the weird squid aliens from that old story with just humans? Nothing wrong just wondering
I can't wait to see Twilight Sparkle fighting back aggressively against her captors, just like Alice in Resident Evil Apocalypse.
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Which weird squid aliens?
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In that original story that your story was based on I think the villains where some weird squid.
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Oh right, I decided to make new aliens, but some are similar to the ones in the other story. Villains will be similar, but not squid-like.
*reads description*
*looks at the story it was inspired by*
Uh oh.
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Uh oh?
I do feel like you can make the chapter longer, but that’s up to you. It’s been fine being short and enjoyable to read
Finally, Twilight gets away from her captors!!! This is going to be very intense now that she has to make a run for it!!!
It’s fine! Take your time
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I was hoping that Shinning armour, Discord, Celestia, Luna, and the pillars of Equestria will go find Twilight Sparkle!! All they need is a fleet of Equestrian military airships and several detachments of EUP guard to accompany them during their rescue mission.
GO, TWILIGHT!!!! FLY TO FREEDOM!!!!!!!!
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I believe they were based off of Illithids.
Fly baby egghead fly!!
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Princess Twilight and Captain Zeck!! This should be interesting.
I find it weird that no one considered that Twilight might have teleported herself. Considering that they noticed the telport started at her horn and they think said horn contains weird technology that they don't understand. I know the teleportation technology they are familiar with takes up rooms, but in the previous chapter Xul also noted that it reminded her of old computers that take up rooms. So it doesn't seem to be that much of a stretch that aliens possesing technology they don't understand are capable of making teleporters that are very small.
Liking the whole speech barrier between characters. I don't see much stories with just characters talking in creative ways.
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I’ll keep that in mind, thanks!
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The way that you say that makes me think it’s a reference, so if you’re thinking that; my story is not a crossover to anything, Zeck is just a name I choose.
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I never said it's a crossover. I can't imagine how exciting it would be if there's an alliance formed between Twilight's Royal Guard and Zeck's UFF fleet.
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My bad then, sorry I just wanted to make sure.
Fun read so far keep it up
I didn't think Xul actually a spy work for the UFF. Quite an interesting plot twist. I can't wait until the escaped prisoners find out who Twilight really is.
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Thanks!
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Yay I did something right! xD
I can tell there is a difference since the story u were inspired by had that crazy boss battle
that pretty much blew up the whole place. It’s not a bad thing but it’s neat to take a different path.
Hopefully Twilight leads the UFF and rules the Universe with an iron hoof
All Hail the Book Worm! All Planets Must Have All Books in order 4x times and clean for Book counting on Saturday
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And every planet has a library on each corner xD
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Very funny. I mean, she already has Equestria to rule over!!! So, the least Twilight Sparkle can do is find a way back home and warn her people of the upcoming alien invasion.
Luna is finally able to see Twilight Sparkle again.
For Twilight's nightmare, I'd figure that it may be something similar as this, disregarding the Mastermind and the impersonating robot.
You know... Discord could just save the day
"Writer's block??"
Anyway, it's nice to have a good start with Twilight, Zeck, Xul, and Chimone. I can't wait to see how they would all react if they ever find out that Twilight Sparkle is actually the ruler of her own kind; the Princess (or Queen) of her own homeland.
Possible Scenario- As soon as they arrived in Equestria's orbit:
Zeck: Okay Twilight. Now that we're here, do you think you can take us to your pony leader? Because we do want to see if she can yield to our........
*Twilight Sparkle pfft and started laughing her head off, much to Zeck's and Xul's confusion*
Xul: Uh Twilight, what is so funny??
Zeck: Was it something I said?!
Twilight: Sorry, Zeck but there isn't actually any pony leader to meet up with in Equestria. I am their leader!!!
Zeck, Chimone, and Xul gasped in unison: Wait, WHAT????!!??
Translator, eh?! I can't wait until they discover Twilight's true nature. This is a very exciting sci-fi story.
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Don't forget that they have magic and medieval weapons to fight with, than rather just with their hooves.
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Wait, they have Medieval weapons?!
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I did see those ponies carrying swords, lances, crossbows, and spears in the MLP comics and in deviant art sometimes; while others were using battle spells.
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The ponies do have limited technology, but it’s weird cuz the royal guard look kinda like medieval knights, then you have Coloratura with smoke machines and lasers. I think the Crystal Empire had some lances being used in jousting.
I pretty much enjoyed this chapter since we finally managed to have Twilight re-announce herself as the commander-and-chief of the Equestrian Ponies. It's only a matter of time before Twilight's nation will yield to the UFF, in which I can count on.
Applejack's message to the sectaniums and Mandors, after learning how they kidnapped and mistreated Princess Twilight Sparkle of Equestria, most likely at 0:30: