I'm just someone who isn't much of a talker, but does like to share several ideas I've thought of.
Gallus seems to be down in the dumps, and his friends try to figure out why. The griffon’s answer, birthdays are fun. They have presents, cake, and maybe even a pinata. However, he doesn’t have one. Without known parents, Gallus has no idea what day he was born on.
Wanting to cheer him up, his friends decide to throw him one. Wanting to make it even better, they decide to make it a surprise party. Though, with his current mood, it that such a good idea?
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Maybe they should have asked Twilight to try a scrying spell to try to find out the exact date.
It would make an interesting story if gallus discovers what happened to his family. Almost like the episode the perfect pear, where the student six meet certain people where the tell their own stories about them.
This was okay. But I think color coding the lines made Silverstream's hard to read on a normal background.
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Yeah, I think I should’ve made it a bit darker
Fixed it.
9980194 It would also be a good idea to put in page breaks or even just a line every so often, so as to break up the flow. It's usually a good idea to do it when the focus shifts from one set of characters to another or when the setting changes from one location to another.
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Thanks for the advice
This is so sweet I got a toothache from reading it
Well, I already did this. It's literally right next to the box I'm typing in, in the Similar section. Let's see how it compares.
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I appreciate the fact that you actually wrote a song. Your grammar needs work, and you really need some horizontal lines for whenever the scene changes. You also should describe your OCs a little more when they pop up. You should really put more detail in your work and maybe take a little more time with your stories. Other than that, this was pretty good. I like how Sandbar brought up past events, especially Sludge. Keep writing and you'll be a master!
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Thanks, I’ll try and remember this
I have an idea for a story. Would you like to hear?
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go ahead
Gallus finally meeting his parents. The reason they abandoned him as egg was because they owed money to a villainous organization that turns young Griffins into thugs and assassins (which they found out later because they didn't know at first) and they didn't want him to be taken. In case you're wondering: Grandpa Gruff is not villain of this story. What do you think?
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I’ll keep this in mind. Thank you.
You're welcome
ohh thats right they went to the future
Awww this was sweet I know I said this so many times but Dang it I feel bad for gallus So anyway apparently he doesn't know about his birthday or when he was born So they decide to throw a surprise birthday party for him and its sweet they this for him a Another great story keep up the good work
Oh trust me he was the worse when I saw this episode my god I really want to punch him in the face for lying to spike
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Thank you for keeping this in mind ❤️