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TheClownPrinceofCrime


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King Sombra has been defeated once again. Once Grogar resurrects him the second time, Sombra is forced to be a permanent member of the Legion of Doom. Although Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy Glow do not quite like Sombra, they do what they can to make Sombra a member due to Grogar’s forceful biddings. However, as Sombra starts to know the three villains personally, his perspective starts to somewhat change.

(This is set after “The Beginning of the End” part 2 MLP:FIM Season 9 episode 2)

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Comments ( 58 )

"BAH HUMBUG!!!
Sombra disobeyed my orders."
That's what Grogar would probably say.

I like these “what if” stories, surprised no one has done a “what if” Grogar was real story.

9990426
I like them myself as well. As for the “what if Grogar was real” story, there has been a couple of them I’ve read. Very interesting stories.

The ironic twist is that Sombra basically did more than the rest combined. He basically destroyed the elements, conquered two empires (even temporarily) faked his death, and came back again and in all honesty, if he had known how aquatinted the Mane 6 were to the Elements to the point where they basically are the Elements, he would've won. Also plot armor.

At least he had some morality to keep them alive. But then why not imprison them.... Oh wait he basically has no way to do that... But then what about dark magic...

Well at least we can give Sombra credit for all of that.

And imagine the looks on their faces once they see a potential Alicorn Sombra.

*Insert Surprise Pikachu*

9990638
You are absolutely right on what Sombra has done. Except on the part that Sombra spared the Mane Six. I know that some villains have standards when they do things, but I personally don’t believe Sombra should be one of them. If he were smart, he would’ve mind-controlled the Mane Six so they would not resist him. It would just be Discord, Celestia, Luna, and the Pillars. Oh, and the alicorn Sombra part sounds like a very interesting concept. Never thought of that.

9990679
Fact: Me and my friend joked on how Cozy was an alicorn and he was not even though he was (1) male (2) unicorn (3) powerful and (4) older.

Sombra: HOW CAN A CHILD BECOME AN ALICORN AND NOT ME?!

Cozy: SUCKS TO BE YOU!

*Cozy obliterates Sombra* (lol)

9990679
Well the male part is incorrect but in his view that should've given him the leverage.

I really like this, and wow, I have been looking for something like this for ages!

You should make a sequel where they defeat the main 6!

9991400
I’ve been thinking about that. You’ll be surprised. :raritywink:

“You foolish little filly, you would be wise to recognize me, King Sombra, the rightful ruler of the Crystal Empire, as the master of fears! I fear NO PONY!! All will one day tremble at my power! I will be undisputed, respected, saluted, and seen for the wonder I am!!” Sombra boasted arrogantly. With that, he flew off to his new chambers in the lair.

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“Obviously. And frankly, I’ll be a monkey’s uncle if you actually manage to destroy Discord himself.” Sombra said.

“You’re so weird.” Cozy giggled.

“You have no idea.” he replied with a smirk.

You just love giving Scar's lines to Sombra. Don't you?

The story has an interesting premise. Or, well, I guess the story is the interesting premise itself. Heh...Aah, I ain't funny.

Very Interesting, I hope there is a sequel. I am curious to see what happens next. Great job! :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by TheClownPrinceofCrime deleted Dec 17th, 2019

9992748
Haha, thank you!
9992795
Thank you! Yes, there will be!

Considering what went down in the actual show, is Grogar here still Discord in disguise?

9993360
No, he is not. I had him as the REAL him.

For a moment I was suspecting Ahuizotl

I love this story! It's excellent.
I feel it deserves the Slice of Life tag, though.

10071858
Thank you! I appreciate that.
Although I’m not much inclined toward Slice of Life tags, you may be right.

I wonder why Grogar didn’t bring Sombra back in the show.

10078979
To put leverage on the trio to secure their loyalty to him. But if Sombra was willing enough to join the crew, they would have been an unstoppable force. Can you imagine if Sombra was with the villains in the Ending of the End finale?

10078998
I can kinda see it, but at the same time, not really

10079002
That’s fine. I felt like they didn’t give him much depth and character throughout the whole show. Very underutilized and wasted.

10079009
At least they gave him dialogue when he wasn’t in his shadowy form

10079026
Better than nothing. And I don’t really mind it

10079030
I’m glad they gave him more screen-time at least. That was something he barely had in season 3.

I like how Tireks talk is more bro-ish than Chrysalis's. Subtle character chemistry makes everything better.

I AM SO PISSED! I HAD ADDED THIS BOOK TO FAVOURITES! I WAS GOING TO READ IT AGAIN, AND IT'S NOT THERE! CONFUSED, I GO TO LIBRARIES, AND THE BOOK IS ON MY 'NOT VERY GOOD' LIST! DUDE I AM SO SORRY!

10101197
Wow! That’s strange. That might’ve been a glitch or something. You’re all good, man!

10101306
Thanks pal! I was really worried that you would be mad.

Oh, hey, the comic relief is back.

Evil laughter bonding time!

Poor Sombra, he just wanted to brood in peace.

Uncle Sombrero!

I smell a cat-astrophe coming!

... I'll see myself out.

Don't be too quick to dismiss her Sombra; her heart may actually be darker than yours.

10129508
YAAAAASSSS!!! Villianous royalty, UNITE!!
Razzy, hoofbump! *holds up hoof (fist)*

If Sombra actually did brainwash the Mane 6, the ponies would surely panic.
The very heroes that literally succeed where the Royal Sisters fail(in terms of protecting Equestria), now mind-controlled and defeated.
The citizens would believe there is no hope now.
The Royal Sisters would see the ponies have lost faith in them. Like the moment they show up and proclaim they would protect the ponies, they will just freak out instead of calming down due to knowing the sisters' track records.

Sombra would have a field day in seeing such true fear without the need of using his fear spell on them.
True natural fear

10299550
It would surely hit Luna worse honestly.

Sombra and Chrysalis also have another thing in common.
Aside from fear(Chrysalis's line about that in the finale would have made Sombra pop up big time).
They were both ultimately screwed due to Spike.
Spike being there and delivering the Crystal Heart which screwed Sombra's plans up.
And Spike befriending Thorax which ultimately led to the hive reforming.
But sadly both also don't seem to realize that Spike is the one who ultimately foiled them(Chrysalis's case being Spike got robbed big time by the writers using Starlight)

10299594
Huh... never thought of it that way... 🤔

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