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What is this a crossover with if I may ask?

This may fit better in another webpage but since the central theme is FiM, it fits here. Not bad enough to deserve those thumbs down, but good enough to deserve more up.

I'm very intrigued to read more

I'm definitely interested in seeing more chapters!!!

Holy crap I was not expecting a new chapter so soon haha😅

This was a very good chapter

This just came out today and I already can’t wait for more! Also, was the merchant supposed to be any character in particular or was she just her own thing?

Does this story include a race of all-male aliens named after various metals?

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Is that a reference to something? Also I think gems don’t have genders but do have preferred pronouns.

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So a Chocobo themed merchant? Neat. What game is she from?

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Considering metals are crystal structures that are simply more malleable than gemstones, the gem race includes metals already. One example canon to the Steven Universe show is Bismuth.

Yes, metals are technically crystals. Look it up.

Holy crap this story finally updated! Can’t wait for more.

This was amazing!!! I wonder if equestria as a whole is a city state? Under the control of the diamonds?

Ooooooo more lore and info

Oooooo this was another great chapter I love it

Wow, not many gems can say they've managed to poof a Diamond single handedly.

That Topaz is gonna need therapy after that.

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All three Topaz in the multi-Topaz fusion will likely need some form of comforting, yes.

“This is the pecking order: you, the dirt, the worms inside the dirt, Grubber’s stool, Grubber, me, and then David, who is also known as Pink Diamond. Any questions?”

Ha, when did Mr. Popo train Fizzlepop Berrytwist?

10173533 *knocks TheUltimateBrony off The Lookout* "Pecking order! Enjoy the climb back up!"

Tempest looked down briefly before chuckling and shaking her head. “Yeah, as if a gem’s going to get anywhere close without shapeshifting.” She stepped up to Bashir and put a hand on the shorter gem’s shoulder. “You said all the readings you’re getting are healthy for David as far as you can tell?”

Oh so they're anthro ponies. I'm glad that's finally explained

All these squares make a circle

10173577 You know, with the story having the anthro tag I kinda assumed Shagohad and I didn't have to bother being explicit about it.

The same ruby responded again, but seemed otherwise accepting of this information. “Yes. What’s a grubber?”

A sidekick.

Well, that went better then I expected. I honestly thought a fight was gonna breakout.

“Yes, this has been quite unpleasant, even if it has been nice to fuse and go for a good, long flight.” A tall, light-purple mare descended and dropped the black-armor-clad form of an unconscious pegasus on the ground. She ran one hand through her tousled, dark-shaded rainbow-colored mane and looked up at me. “Hello, I’m Rainlight. The battle’s waning, and the invading forces of the Storm King are on the run. Am I going to have to freeze you in a block of ice to stop your gems from turning on us afterwards, or are you on our side already?”

... blue-screens

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I wasn't expecting the threatening question from a fusion of Twilight and Rainbow, and the fact that the MLP characters are also Gems in of themselves...

I don’t think ice could stop a Diamond. What would have been their plan if David was hostile, and the ice plan didn’t work?

Aww I thought the forecast called for raining men

Interesting how candence's cutie mark is her actual gem

10194620 Well, Celestia and Luna had fused into Queen Eclipse (Solar variant because daytime) and Twilight was already fused with Rainbow, either fusion could have added Cadance to them to gain another alicorn's worth of magic power AND the super-flexible cartoon-physics powers of a Spinel, PLUS Rainbow Quartz was on-scene, albeit a different-looking variant because of personality differences...

So, yeah, ponies had allies and options if David had hostile intent.

Great story I love it I hope it comes back soon.

“Okay, right, let’s get this out of the way right now for the newcomers. Direct from your diamond through my lips.” Tempest grinned at the offending newborn gem in a way that would probably have scared something smarter than a ruby. “This is the pecking order: you, the dirt, the worms inside the dirt, Grubber’s stool, Grubber, me, and then David, who is also known as Pink Diamond. Any questions?”

Yessss:rainbowkiss: update, good work in that chapter.

Tempest blinked and shook her head at that comparison. “I’m sorry, what? What does adding a dick to me have to do with David’s old temper issues? I’m talking about practical issues here, like, would I have to replace my entire wardrobe, and just where everything would fit and, I mean, if it’s not going to just be there all the time how I’d control when it shows up…”

Futa is always better!!🤤

“That was a straight answer. The easiest way for me to make a change like that to someone you’ve altered is for it to be based on a pun. If she has it and wants to get rid of it for fashion or whatever, she needs to get off then twist until it hurts, then it’ll vanish until she wants it again.” Discord tucked Delphi into her own chair, then looked right into Tempest’s eyes. “I can give you an instruction manual if you need more clarity.”

Could just give her magical panties that hide her bulge instead makes it alot easier

honestly, I love this so far

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