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Teddie Williams


My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fan that happens to have a strong imagination and loves to read and write. What else is there to say? Wow...Forgot I had this Account...Oops.

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After a run in with the Dazzlings where they reveal exactly how much they knew about her past, Sunset did exactly what anypony back where she came from would do. She sang a song about her feelings, letting it all out. What happened at the end of her song though is what is bothering her. She knew her friends at the time transformed anytime they played music... she didn't realize that she could transform too. The problem? She transformed into a humanized phoenix not a humanized unicorn.
In an attempt to learn why she would transform into that, she runs away back to Equestria to do a little investigation into the matter. With her friends from both sides of the portal trying to find out what's bothering her, and give her a helping hoof, I mean hand, can she find out the truth behind Sunset Shimmer...?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 21 )

Wait wait wait! Ok Sci Twi there...you got the time lines screwed up. Battle fo the bands happen before the freidnship games so Sci Twi not there yet.

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He/She had it where Sunset was thinking about it all this time, not knowing what to do.
At least I think so

This is an amazing story so far, I really like it!

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Maybe the next chapter or two will clear it up, but so far, it seems like this is taking place before "Friendship Games", but still has Sci-Twi.

like where it is going so far

The mentioned senior year, that was AFTER Evergreen, seeing has they were still students in the episodes following...maybe a year later. Sunset Shimmer's been stewing on that tidbit for a long time then.

im confused when this story is set the summary implied after rainbow rocks (more accurately after my past is not today)

yet sci twi is here

and this barely feels like a chapter at all the story does not even start here this is just the first scene of a chapter at best

You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Are the Dazzlings going to appear more than once in this story?

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Ok... thank you! I...actually haven't thought about it before. Honestly having the Dazzlings show up might take away from the story. IDK.
Most likely they will not show up in this story, though there is a chance that they will be mentioned.
Teddie

She transformed into a humanized phoenix not a humanized unicorn.

But, didn't she turn into a humanized unicorn during Rainbow Rocks?

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Yes... but not during the song/short My Past is not today. Technically they had her turn into a phoenix so as to show as to put emphasis on the fact that she is working on being a 'whole new person'. She's changed from her old self to a newer, better version......
She turned into a phoenix to show that she has changed and is starting anew. Does any of that makes sense, or am I just confusing you more... go watch My past is not today. Then you'll understand. (Hint: It takes place before the 'final battle'. Shortly after the Dazzlings bullied Sunset, making her question whether or not she will ever leave the bad girl reputation behind her.)
Does any of this help you?
Teddie

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.... Allow me to point you in the direction of the Friendship Games movie which actually was where the song "My Past is Not Today" was meant to debut.... and specifically the scene in the Black Bar of Censored Spoilers below

Sunset Shimmer became a phoenix like figure that was dubbed Daydream Shimmer to confront the corrupted human Twilight Sparkle, who at the time was known as Midnight Sparkle

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Even ignoring the most likely incorrect statement on my end regarding the intended debut movie for that song.... It is CANONICALLY SHOWN that she "phoenixed up," as i am now dubbing it, twice in the history of Equestria Girls, once during a song again to help what became a friend in need

In a statement completely unrelated to what i was commenting on earlier i am a fan of this story despite the pacing problem

The portal is in the front of the school. Why is the front of the school fenced off? :rainbowhuh:

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I don't know... I guess somewhere in the back of my mind, it makes sense to me that a school should have a fence around it. Maybe to keep criminals from breaking into it during the night when they're running from the cops or something.
I'll let you know if I ever figure out why there is a fence there.
Teddie

Uh oh, Sunset's pulling a Twilight. Getting so caught up in a puzzle that the rest of the multiverse becomes irrelevant. Hopefully she doesn't get too far along in ignoring everyone before someone wises her up to the possible consequences.

Glad to see this update. Here's to hoping your muse stays with you.

"Thunder Flash" is actually a fairly popular character name. :twilightsheepish:

It lives! :pinkiegasp:

I may have to go back and reread. I'm just a little confused.

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