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Rainbow Dash is Leaving to go to the Wonderbolts Academy, the best College for Athletics. 12 of her teammates from CHS are joining her and have obtained a house for them to share nearby. As nervous as she is, an old friend is going to make things interesting!



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Chapters (10)
Comments ( 13 )

10 chapters in one day?! 20,000,000% cool.
Instant follow!

10065768
Thanks!
But I just posted them all at once, it took me about 3 weeks. Sorry to disappoint.

10065859
I wasn't disappointed, I was actually surprised

I'm a little confused. I realize this is your first story, but it's a little rushed, and I don't quite understand the characterizations. Also, how did Lightning Dust find out about Rainbow Dash so quickly?

Comment posted by Godslittleprincess deleted Feb 3rd, 2020

Well, you nailed Fleetfoot. I'll give you that.

Okay, the characterizations go back and forth between spot-on and really wonky, but it's not bad for a first story.

Okay, this part feels a little rushed. I feel as if the writing only barely scratches the surface of what Dash and Soarin are really feeling.

Okay, this was pretty rushed too. Also, in the middle of the stage with all their friends watching feels like the worst place for that conversation to happen.

Yeah, so, what exactly happened to Scootaloo's parents? That was a bit unclear.

"Enjoying the Carnival RD?" One of her friends with Blonde hair said, "Ya look a little sad."

What do you mean by Blonde haired girl its AJ. Spitfire didn't you study in canterlot high then you should have known who she is

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