There was a storm outside, simple as that. Everyone is supposed to stay inside, right? Twilight and Spike thought so too until they received a strange guest at their doorstep.
Note: The Doctor is his own character in terms of personality.
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That was pretty funny, actually. A few minor mistakes here and there, but overall it was a good story! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
Loved it. I laughed. Good job mate.
I wonder if the Doctor chose to tell Twilight the truth about himself. After all, if he is who he appears to be, then he has the ability to lie as easily as he breathes when it is necessary. It is a simple task for a being who has watched entire worlds burn and species that bestrode the universe as if gods snuffed out like candles.
Of course, those things don't stop him being a good pony, although he would doubt it.
Now, I wonder if his next stop will be Canterlot to tell Celestia that he is very disappointed in her decision-making and life choices and that she should stop using children, no matter how talented, to solve her problems for her. I think he will also have to apologise to Luna for so inadvertantly misleading her into creating Nightmare Moon. Sorry, just the Whovian in me thinking ahead.
DOCTOR: You will leave this world, and do so with it unharmed and you will never return.
DISCORD: And if I don't choose to follow your advice, oh Oncoming Storm?
DOCTOR: Then I won't be able to protect you from what happens next.
Doctor x Twilight seems as popular as Doctor x Derpy nowadays...
LOLOLOLOLSo cute the doc and twi
wouldnt rainbow dash owe the princess? ya know bcuz rainbow almost killed her with that clowd?
Wait. Why Complete? I thought there'd be more.
1115838 Wait, what? How can you kill someone with a cloud? Then again, this is Equestria, the land of magic, ponies, and Grimdark Fanfics.
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It's supposed to be a one shot. I might continue it if there is enough demand, but I'm working on something else for fimfiction.
I liked it until the end where it was revealed that everything was built on manipulations and lies.
I loved this story sounds like something the Doctor would do, very well thought out. Would be great to see this expand so I'll be watching this for a bit just in case.
This was a very cute short story. I really enjoyed the interactions between the characters, especially the Doctor and Spike. Silly little dragon, coming down with that "kiss already" statement. :)
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the shipper inside him couldn't help it :3
1132259 Indubiably.
This NEEDS to be continued, i demand it!
didn't really get that last bit at the end but still good fic
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That's because Twilight x Doctor is best shipping!
good story you should make another chapter or story
I LUV THIS STORY!!! Perfect pairing, if I do say so myself... You should write another chapter! I REALLY enjoyed this story! GO DR WHOOVES!!
This story really deserves more attention. With this ongoing plague of poorly thought out front page ship fics, it's refreshing to re-read one that is done well.
Definitely going to have to check out your other stuff, didn't see that until now.
Not upvoting or downvoting. This story didn't do much for me. The dialogue and humor was pretty good, but the longer narrated sections weren't put together pretty well, sometimes tearing me out of the narrative. The shipping felt forced when it came up, and the ending stuff about this being a "conspiracy" to get the two of them together was just...bad.
Not bad enough to warrant a downvote, but this story isn't going on any of my lists...
i rather liked this story the paysing was good not to fast not to slow i do like this ship and the one with ms.derpy wooves
and spikes comment was both funny and understandable after all he is a baby dragon we all did that at one point in are childhood
but still over all a fantastic story and a new chapter would be welcomed ( ok now i have the critic out i can relly talk now)
this was one of the best twilight x doctor whooves i persanly have ever read.spikes little comment was hillarius and suted the situation and
again was the funnyst thing i have read allthough thare was one part that made me the doctor defeated when we are tolled later he could have escaped but still a good story (no that wont do) nevermind i take that back a fantastic story (thare that should do the story justice )
2104112 Agreed
Ever since a strange and recent outbreak of a flu virus among the pegasi took its toll
Having flashback from the pandemic of the earlier 2020
Ohh ouch come on doc don't be like that
Yep that is the question we really want to know for almost a century but never getting that answer which that was part of the charm of the doctor
Lol nice one Spike
Oh yeah the sleepover episode I remember that one and that was my first time watching My Little Pony friendship is Magic is that episode
You clever girl
Yep Ponyville seen so many crazy stuff throughout season 1 through 9 it's becoming a regular thing lol
Wow I got to say this was a pretty nice story seeing how the doctor and Twilight interact with each other given how much they have in common with each other a little bit both of them are smart and and it was pretty sweet of the doctor giving a lesson of magic to Twilight even Twilight kind of likes him even though he is very odd Pony and despite that they actually get along and apparently Spike Rainbow Dash and Derpy knows about it as well again this was nice keep up the good work