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This story is a sequel to A Moonlit Transformation
Princess Luna, or rather Jimmy Hook, has succesfully returned to Equestria, and has settled back into her role as Princess of the Night. However, odd circumstances and a strange visitor cause Luna to reconsider whether her fantasy of living as her favourite character is worth it.
NOTE: It is crucial that you read A Moonlit Transformation before reading this, or else the story won't make much sense.
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Thank you! Fave bit so far?
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I can see why. Cadence is so much fun to write.
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Researching all the attire was fun too (and coming up with character names).
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But no pirates.
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Or go on adventures with scientists.
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Well, that's all I can think of for now.
Excellent start :3
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Fave bit so far?
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You shall find out tomorrow.
This was what I meant by developing Hook as a character.
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The rivalry with Steimer.
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And all that.
That deserves a story all too itself.
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Idea in place.
Okay, my favorite part in this chapter? Meeting Cozy Glow in the Dream Realm <3
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OK then. And the character development that I gave to Captain Hook?
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Pretty good :3
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Yarrrr.
(Not that Captain Hook!)
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Watch this space.
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Nobody else has shown much interest.
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Thanks.
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Hooray!
Heh, gotta love how Stan Lee used that quote in the Spiderman franchise X3
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Greetings, my lady. I trust this is to your approval?
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Yes =3
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Excellent.
So transformation also gives out the powers? Cool
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In the words of Stan Bush;
So this also teleport him too?
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Damned moon power.
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It may not end as you expect...
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Or mayeb it will?
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Truen
Man, if Canon!Celestia acted more reasonable, that would make things a whole lot easier and make it so that the writers never used Lauren's original vision.
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I put that in there especially for you.
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Heh X3
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Besides, switching power for a neurotic, flanderized bookworm is mighty irresponsible.
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Now Celestia knows how wrong she is. XD
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I applaud the writing team for holding true to Faust's vision, but it was done so poorly.
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Yep. :P
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Any other points?
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Thanks. Now to wait on the Hookmeister.
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Fave bit of the story overall?
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OK.
Nice chapter, now I'm addicted to it
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Wanna see more?
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Yes of course
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Joimmy has plenty in that field.
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Yeah I'm following him too
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You may wanna check out 8 Magic Nights. That has Tom, Jimmy and Katrina at WDW.
I will say this to loosely echo Misty's Comment: Perfect ending all the way. X3
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Fave bit?