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Steel Quill
A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!
Steel Quill
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This is kinda random and fast but it’s been bothering me since the second story you posted. I’m still disappointed after the first story being a really good pony porn, literally everything after has been nothing but anthro. I mean I’ve read some of them and there were great but I just can’t ever get into them as well. Not trying to be a downer keep so keep doing the great work. I know a lot of others enjoy it even if I don’t!!
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I understand! I chose to mainly write anthro because the body design and descriptions came easier to me that way than pure pony did.
However! I do have a couple brainstormed ideas that are actually intended to be pure pony! So the possibility is not out of the realm yet!
This is a great story!
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Thank you very much!
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You’re welcome!
Gud. Kinda wish it was set after Rainbow Butts In so our favorite blue pony was thicc but this was still gud.
This was really enjoyable.
Could you please make a Filthy Rich x Applejack clopfic?
I like this weird ship.
Anyway,
Have a nice day
I don't think there's enough clopfics involving "squish/squishing" descriptions.
This one joins that little elite class thicc and lewdly.
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I would’ve pursued that story route, but contest requirements make it so the story I submit has to be a standalone piece, not a sequel or continuation of my other works. Alas!
HA! I knew Rarity was a horn dog.
Oh fuck that was good. Well, gonna cancel mine, can't even half match this.
10109720
No no! Don’t cancel yours! If you have a story, put it out there! I didn’t think I did that good a job!
10109777
You vastly underestimate how just -fine- of a writer I am and how good you are.
10111136
Dude, I have stories I've put tons of work into and they fell like, super flat! You do a lot of good work, your ideas are very entertaining!
Hello.
I remember a fic about FilthyJack
I like the story of a rich businessman who, tired of his wife's infidelity, finds love in a young farmer.
Applejack respects Filthy, that respect becomes friendship, that friendship in love that love in a night of passion.
A love that they keep secret for others.
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What's the fic?
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Pretty good job of writing the way Rainbow's checking out Twilight.
-Just criminal that you teleport away the sexy workout clothing in the middle of a section break. Let us see it! Let us see them removing it!
-Skipped a lot of foreplay for no discernible reason. We don't get the moment they first saw each other naked, for example.
-A bit fast at the very end, not too bad, but it could have been drawn out more.
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I’ll catch you the next time we have a workout.” Rainbow said-- incorrect dialog punctuation.-The characters are cute and stay in-character pretty well.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 89/100
Allure: 80/100
Enticement: 78/100
Immersion: 87/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 423/500
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