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Very neatly done and suspenseful. I like the use of medicinal conditions for the horror element (lapse in memory) which is nice usage both body horror and psychological.
Its quite the contrast from my story in the contest. The tragedy could have been more and the emotions could have been more emphasized but I will give it a 8.3/10.
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Thank you so much for your thoughts! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm curious about your story now. I'll have to give it a read.
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It's messy because I tried to emulate the "Page turn" scare format seen in Horror manga and comics (learned that hard way that text stories can use page turn suspense).
wow another excellent appledash fanfic
keep creating more appledash
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Not exactly the happiest appledash story, but thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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Hey there, thanks for the story, looking forward to reading it.
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You are very welcome! I hope you enjoy reading it. And thank you so much for the contest! It is definitely appreciated, and we need more Halloween in our calendar year hehe
Doc: Starlight, we need you to take a trip, got that time spell handy?
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hehe very nice! And would solve the problem (among all others)!
Wow! That was dark. Rainbow digging up Applejack's body was already messed up enough, but her killing Twilight was something I didn't expect. Been a while since I read such a well thought out and well written grimdark story. Good job!
I totally expected some twist at the end, but then I remembered that she tongue kissed AJ and I was like:
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hehehe kind of leaves a bad taste in your mouth don't it