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icedragon512


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Very good so far)
You definitely have written into the table for some time and I would say it did provide you quite the edge compared to many others here:twilightsmile:
Also I'm glad you made stuff cost 750$, nice touch!

I am interested. Please continue

Looking good so far!! Already want the next chapter 😊

Looking good so far! Already want the next chapter 10/10

now I looked for Malcador's staff... Fire themed psyonics makes so much sence)

This shows promise. Only real gripe I have (but really, it can be considered a nitpick) is that paragraphs seem a little to large.
All in all, pretty good so far.

Nice start :D we all demand more chapters

Loving it so far keep going bud

I loved how this story is going ad thank ye for writing this and hope ye keep working on this story.

Is the gender disparity just an excuse for a harem or is there also RGRE

oh hey one of the stories i like has updated, nice chapter cant wait for more, and on that waiting part, ima have to get back to rewriting my first chapter

Huzzah! An update! I look forward to reading this

Okay, bit Random at points, but still interesting. I will keep an Eye on this.

Well this is looking to be shaping up into something interesting. *Sips Tea* I am eagerly awaiting more

Lovely story, My Good Sir!! Keep up the good work!!

More also if your going to do sex do only one night stands harem will always ruin a good story. If people wanted porn we would click on it instead of reading this. But I love the story so far

“Hey, at least I have a girlfriend who likes 40k just as much as I do, so chill, also Sarah and I are just a grand away from getting a minivan anyway. Anyway we’re getting off topic, are you really going to just wear a FFDP(Five-Finger-Death-Punch) t-shirt, blue jeans, and your work boots?” he asks, a little peeved.

This is basically how I dress everyday.

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Yeah, I seen to only wear that whenever I go to work, so decided to put that into the story

Well.... A bit sad that the four are here and there doesn't appear to be any of the more order aligned beings here....

Also a bit sad the laughing god has no sway *Sips Tea* always enjoyed him... Though I could honestly see Discord as a being he highly favors...

Is Antonio a perpetual?

Hey Luna, Booga Booga Booga!

Antonio: Hey Luna! Wanna see a dead body?!:pinkiecrazy:

How will eat the cheese cake now it will go right through him. ;also pinkie hugs are the best:pinkiesmile:

YES! I was losing hope for an update!

Also a bit of correction: astral Projection doesn’t use the soul, it uses the active mind. While their are inherent dangers to it, none of them are lethal in anyway.

Loved the chapter hope to see more soon.

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On normal circumstances that would be true, but the thing that caused Antonio to go 'pop' was a Lord of Changes. If you read a little into the lore about psykers and what a Lord of Change can do, then what happened to Antonio is not out of the realm of possibility.

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Yes and no, a perpetual in 40k lore can died in certain circumstances and by certain items. Antonio however has a type 8 regenerative healing factor, making him immortal in body, mind, and soul.

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I've been debating with myself on whether I should add the Laughing God in a future chapter or not, but Discord will most definitely make an appearance at some point.

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Ah right, forgot that bit.

Well, at least he came into contact with a minion of one of the......Less Evil (never thought I would say that about a Warp God) Deamon’s currently in Equestria.

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At least discord may get his time to shine I suppose.

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I would say Discord now in modern equestria is chaotic good. He's not evil but you are insane to believe he will follow a law to the letter unless it will directly make fluttershy happy.

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Wasn’t talking about Discord :rainbowlaugh:

More of this death humor and other things

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Que the flokk of ''geese'' screaming in fear.

Ps. Did he also tilt all of the paintings in the hallhall way

I absolutely love it also keep up the good work I'd love to see how he weasels his way out of that last scene.

"Ok ladies, we're almost done. The oven has been preheated to 350?"

Fahrenheit or Celsius?

"*Cough* *cough* Welp, there goes dinner." I mumble as I try to spit byil out of my mouth. "Where, the fuck, can I be to be able to produce such a smell?"

I mumble as I try to spit bile* out of my mouth

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Fahrenheit, was never taught Celsius

okay early start, though you have some issues with massive walls of text early in the chapter. Keep it up.

That last part was fucking hilarious. I'm looking forward to more from this fic. That being said, I hope you keep any crossovers noncanon, usually it's the crossovers that end up causing displaced stories to fail, mostly because the author actually integrates them into the story and it leads to a total clusterfuck of weird narratives combining together, especially when the crossovers are collaborative efforts.

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I'll most likely involve a crossover like a side quest in a rpg, it happened but no one talks about it and has little to no influence on the overarching plot

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Honestly that would be hilarious if our main character actually MENTIONS it being like a side quest. something like
MC: So this is basically a side quest then, and we're never going to speak of this again?
Person who summoned them: Pretty much.

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