Rarity wants to take me to an art museum.
Me.
Rainbow Dash.
To an art museum.
Yeesh.
Silver medal finisher in the Friendship is Short Shorts short short writeoff for the month of May!
Rarity wants to take me to an art museum.
Me.
Rainbow Dash.
To an art museum.
Yeesh.
Silver medal finisher in the Friendship is Short Shorts short short writeoff for the month of May!
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Very well done -- you've done a great job of capturing Rainbow's mental "voice" here, and this is a wonderful take on her being driven so far out of her comfort zone that she feels obliged to come through in the end -- and she does. Nice!
The picture alone made me laugh. Time to read!
Loved it! Really captured both Rarity and Rainbow’s personality.
Really nice! You did a good job of putting me in Rainbow's mind and having it feel natural. I also liked how your story played off the differences between Rainbow and Rarity in a way that highlights the strengths of their friendship and their respect for each other, even if they have a bit of fun at each other's expense sometimes.
This was great. Really captured the feel of what a day out for Rainbow and Rarity would look like, without any drama.
This is great. It's funny, and shows character, and even says something about art.
I loved these lines:
Perfect description!
And this may be the best of all, because it shows (not tells) us Rainbow grasping a hooffull of aesthetic consciousness, concisely and without breaking character voice:
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Thank you for the kind words, friend!
Your writing style is a goddamn breath of fresh air. Thank you.