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"Show my head to the people, it is worth seeing." - Georges Danton

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Soft vore is underrated

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As much as hard vore is overrated

Not bad at all!

I think my only main complaint is the repetetive use of 'she could feel', and tongue/magic fucking isn't really my thing, but good stuff!

The end seems to imply a follow up, will there be one?

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i've been paid to do 5 chapters, chapter 2 will come out in a week, the other chapters are currently being written.

Also holy shit i used that 15 times XD. muh bad.

Despite not adding this to my tracking list due to lack of interest in the premise, I will be keeping an eye out for the later chapters, because I am curious as to how this will turn out

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Ehh.. I wouldn't say hard vore is overrated. I'd say hard vore is harder to do well than soft vore.

Really hope that future chapters don't go down the same road this one did.

So Nightmare Moon is just Luna in disguise. I looking forward to seeing how this would end.

Oh ho! The zinger to get a reaction. Now to find out if NMM is real or the parasite was purged as we all thought and Luna is just really horny (and not because she's an alicorn, hah)

However, if NMM is real and not currently hiding in Luna... where the heck is she? Pretty sure if it was Celestia herself, we'd get Daybreaker if canon is anything to go by. Rarity is always a close secondary target too. Dunno if it's even possible for Chrysalis to get a nightmare form (tho by the mirror logic, it would be a force of good which would be really weird)

so I guess next round is Anal vore and Celestia loses because it wouldnt make sense to give her a win to 3/1 and you said there are 5 chapers means Celestia will end as shit

Honestly kinda sad celestial win this one, was pretty fun otherwise though. I would just have loved to have her reborn and call nmm mom until she woke up.

I really want Luna to be unaware and just suffering side-effects because it's the Nightmare.

I also want Celestia to lose, by point, in the end.

RIP Luna:fluttershyouch:

Just for giggles I’m going to propose that, despite all the signs seeming to point clearly in her direction, Luna is actually innocent and that the Nightmare’s host, aware or not, is in fact Sirius -- that oh-so-innocuous guard who’s spent all these nights being a side character on royal cuddling duty and thus conveniently close to Celestia right whenever she’s having those dreams.

Mostly because that’s how I would probably set things up if I was angling for a surprise tweest at the end, granted. :twistnerd:

Final round, fight.

Heh, that last scene was awesome. I'm fairly certain Celestia won't actually beat Luna senseless but a scuffle in the kitchen? I'd be right there next to Discord with the popcorn as an epic food fight breaks out between two beautiful alicorns getting quite messy. :rainbowlaugh:

And like that, you lost me.
Luna loses FAR too often in these sort of things.

I like it :twilightblush:

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