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Twilight Star


Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other

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Twilight just became an alicorn princess and her new duty was making her very stressed. Mainly because of the ponies wanting her autographs very often since she returned to Ponyville after her coronation and her wings move against her will when she goes to sleep. Luna, noticing the stress her marefriend has been experiencing lately, decides that she will help her feel more relaxed.

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short but good story, i waited for some belly rub and even if there wasn't any i still liked it

Not bad. Though a few errors here and there I will point out. You refer to Twilight's wings as their wings rather than her wings. You also say awake Spike when it should be waking I believe.

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I'm sorry for the mistakes. But I already fix them

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You need to try and get in the habit of going over your stories before you publish them a little more. We all make grammar mistakes.

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