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Teardrops

Have you ever taken the time to stop and look at the stars?
To bask in the beauty of the night sky?

This is a short tale of a filly that does, learning a new lesson in life along the way.

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Chessie

Chessie #1 · Oct 2nd, 2012 · · · Teardrops ·

Short, REALLY sweet, and well written for being something so simple. I was ready to nail it to the wall for the length but this is actually not bad.

-Chessie

Dusty Sage

Dusty Sage #2 · Oct 2nd, 2012 · · · Teardrops ·

A reminder that the night has a magic all its own. Very nice.

coppercore

coppercore #3 · Oct 2nd, 2012 · · · Teardrops ·

Something tells me that the "voice" was Luna, am I right?

Pandela

Pandela #4 · Oct 3rd, 2012 · · · Afterword ·

Thank you all for the support. I always appreciate the feedback.
The Voice was not Luna, but -something yet to be discovered. Perhaps it already has been discovered.
The choice is yours to make. Each path leads somewhere else you know...

-Pandela

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