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Grand-Galvatron


Hello Fimfiction Writers, I am Grand-Galvatron, EQG Fimfic writer, and Supreme Ruler of the Decepticon Empire!

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I hope everyone likes this story. I've been working hard on it.

So, Sunset got dumped in a Springtrap suit?

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Rather different in design to classic Springtrap.

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I know. I wanted their suits to look exactly like them, but with features that resemble the classic animatronics.

Woah turning sunset into a fusion of Springtrap and Sunset Shimmer now that is a cool story to make man.

I've come to give some criticism! Friendly criticism, that is.

Decent story! Im liking it so far. It explains the basis of the FNAF story, although a little modified. Still, its great!

The biggest thing i'm going to be pointing out is the paragraph spacing. Whenever a new character begins to speak, you should start a new paragraph/line. If you have two characters speaking in one paragraph, it becomes difficult to read. Spacing it out allows it to be read easier.

I'll be following the story! Keep writing.

Part 2: Is when she's going to meet The Puppet (Rarity), and the others.

I'm making Story 2 of this series right now.

I love it man keep making more chapters I am still supporting you.

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Well, the animatronics are not what they look like in the actual games. These are animatronic versions of each equestria girls character but with distinct features of the original animatronics.

For example: Twilight would have bunny ears. Pinkie would have the bow tie and top hat of Freddy, and Rainbow Dash has foxy’s hook.

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Ah....that makes sense. But its weird to think of Freddy as pink

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