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Ah, so Elsie got Kaede'd. Trying to find the spy is almost never a good idea. The theme of Danganronpa is often just how much the truth can hurt. Usually, finding out the spy's identity screws everyone over, and results in more tragedy than simply leaving it be.
I'm beginning to think these characters aren't from the same universe. The differences in diction and even names are so strange. I feel like the explanation is actually much simpler than alternate universes. Just a hunch.
The bit about the earpieces is very clever, and I never noticed it. Applause to you.
I still do wish there were two killers, but this is still satisfying. I do like the twist of it being a genuine attempt at sacrifice and not just a regular killing, particularly since it puts Greyscale in the crosshairs of everyone who thought she could have succeeded.
But that is very interesting. The structure of the buildings implies that this has possibly happened before. Were there previous killing games, or is the mastermind modeling this after old events orchestrated by someone else?
All in all, exemplary work. Have a good rest, my friend. You've earned it.
Gotta say that I really like how everything in the trial is wrapped up here. I never really cared for Elsie, but this chapter definitely changed my opinion of her. The fact that she wanted everyone to be able to live together really puts into perspective how she reacted when Maribelle had said something similar. I imagine she became overwhelmed by her goal and how she couldn't be a part of it, then.
I'm glad to have found this story, and I'll be eagerly awaiting its return!
Woo!
Man, was that a brutal execution. I thought mine were brutal, but yeesh!
Maribelle's actin' -extra sus- in this chapter.
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Just for saying that, I'm going to make all future executions even more brutal than I was originally planning.
So it seems I may have overthought what was going on a little bit. Greyscale was right, just missing a few key details. Well damn.
And so, the fate of the Ultimate Interior Designer is to design with her interiors. I didn't like her that much for a while, but I certainly felt sorry for her in the end. While I wouldn't say I necessarily WANT anyone to die next, if I had to choose it would probably be Maribelle. Hey, if Part 3 follows Danganronpa tradition, let's just say the odds are in favor.
In any case, have a good hiatus! I will be eagerly waiting for the day this story returns, but take as much time as you need.
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Hmmmmmm...
I shall continue vigorously looking for loopholes. XD
Buen capítulo, me encanta esta serie, Greyscale me parece un protagonista excelente, lleno de defectos y medio loco, Mesmer es un hijo de rre mil pero se nota que se preocupa (eso creo) del prota y con Dopple aunque no creo que sea el espía ahora, igual siento que oculta algo; supongo que tendremos que espera hasta que salga el siguiente arco.
Sigue así
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Hello! Thank you so much for your kind comments! I'd been keeping up with them over the past few days and was thrilled that you managed to read it all so quickly! I hope the story has made sense when put through Google Translate, though I cannot promise anything.
With that in mind, I believe you've started reading this story at just the right time as I've been putting the finishing touches on the upcoming chapter, and parts of it would've caused problems if someone is using translation software. I've made some minor adjustments which should make things easier for you. (No spoilers here, but I can explain once it's uploaded.) I hope you enjoy!
As an aside, since I notice from your profile picture that you're a fan of Sonic, I have actually written a one-shot Sonic fanfiction on my AO3 account, if you'd be interested. (The Truth About Miles)
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Pues salvo a algunas partes (en la mayoría partes de los juicios), no tuve tanto problemas de traducción, uso Google translate desde que conocí Fimfiction, así que se como funciona, por lo que pude disfrutar muy bien de tu historia fácilmente, también ayudo de tu buena descripción a la hora de narrar escenarios o sentimientos, se comprende muy bien.
Que bueno que llegue justo para el tercer arco, estas partes la verdad son mis menos favoritas en los juegos (en especial en el v3, que tenia un potencial increíble) por lo predecibles que pueden llegar a ser y por los motivos que estos se provocan, estoy muy seguro que en tu caso así no será ¿Que misterios y desesperación nueva nos traera en este capítulo? ¡¡Que nervios!!
Y muchas gracias por hacer esta historia, más tarde iré a leer la de Tails que ya me leí su descripción y se parece que va hacer algo pertubadora