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Its difficult to read and there is a lot of grammar error. The story looks good but needs a bit of cleaning.
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Explain it to me how, please...
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There are a lot of lower cases in the beginning of sentences, there are words missing between a lot of sentences. In truth this has good potential but there are rushed in areas. A simple fix here and there and the story is great
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Please provide me an example of what you have found...
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His right, you need a grammar checker.
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I just need an example of it; that's all...
This made me think of the land before time.
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Is it because of Cera...?
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No the death of Littlefoot's mom.
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I see: that hurt too; still have the original VHS....
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My family has all the movies. I like the hand drawn ones better.
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Same here...
For those who want to see the full version of the cover pic, check out 1587793 on Derpi.
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That was highly unnecessary: the fact I'd said who made the art should've sufficed; failing that, you could've at least review the story...