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Nice start! Looking forward to more ^^
Ohhhhhh the non-con tag. Interesting. I wonder where this will lead too?
This is a really good start. The only thing that concerns me is the Non-Con tag.
" he was good to make any mare happy" if they are all humans then this quote is wrong
Yeah, I agree with Hirow. Judging by Spike’s mention of the “palace,” I get that this is a humanized version of Equestria. However, the use of “mare” instead of “woman” is kinda throwing me off. Other than that, everything looks fine.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Are you doing a human and an anthro story for each girl spike gets lucky with?
Wow. I don't even like Rainbow Dash that much and this first chapter already has me hooked! Well done, can't wait to see how this develops.
Nice 👌( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Great first two chapters!
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According to tags, this would indeed be some humanized version of the FIM show, not EqG. The non-con tag worries me, though.
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The tag is gone now. It had me worried a bit too. Maybe the author was undecided on whether or not Rainbow's initial grab warranted it or not.
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That’s exactly right, actually. It began with questionable consent, but there is no rape so the tag is not necessary.
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Thanks for the clarification.
This story has been very enjoyable so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
awesome mate
Great chapter!
So when’s the next chapter? It’s getting really hot so far.
Great story so far!
Great chapter!
She's 'addicked'(addicted) to him now.
awesome
awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story
Great story!
Great story, I really enjoyed this one.
This was a good story and I enjoyed reading it. I suggest an epilouge chapter where the rest of the girls find out about the relationship and Rarity gets a little jealous.
Ever saw/watch the anime TONIKAWA: Over The Moon For You?
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I can’t say that I have.
This looks promising. But I do have to point out a couple of head-scratchers.
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Errors corrected. Thank you.
Uhmmm… Wut?
Bit of a brisk pace for a believable romance but good enough for cute smut.