Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!
Applejack and Rainbow Dash have a meandering chat at the gym. No reason they shouldn't have a conversation at the gym... They're not there for any other reason.
For Krazy's Appledash stuff. If you want to read about it Click Here.
If any of you know the artist/picture please tell me, I know I got it from somewhere but I can't find where for the life of me.
Not exactly 1k because Krazy's a big meany with his minimum words! So exactly 1.5k! :D
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nice ^ ^
Though I could never do a polyamorous relationship, but I'm always curious in stories of seeing how people portray them.
Needs a touch more polishing (mainly with some words being in present tense whilst story is told in past tense) but overall not bad, not bad at all.
I'm a sucker for some polyamorous relationships and you've got the beginnings of quite the cute one right here! It's wonderfully in character that RD and AJ would work up some crazy scheme to try and hit on someone they've got their eye on at a gym, then to not even have thought up a proper excuse.
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Never! *Snickers.*
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In my defense, that's from me hitting S because it's next to D, not because I can't keep the tense right! :D
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Hehe, they aren't the best planners.
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I figured that might be the case. At least OpenOffice is bad at catching those since the word is still technically correct, so no red squiggly lines to call attention to them xP
Aw dang, that ended too quickly. I was hoping for them to stumble over themselves, trying to figure out what to say. Still, an enjoyable read!
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I am actually working on a sequel.
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wow...this was good.
That Rarity twist at the end was especially amazing.
moving on to the proposal now
One long setup for a good joke. Fun!
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Muhahaha!
Really fun story and I personal love the setting because I probably spend the most time at the gym than anywhere else. I also enjoyed the dynamic between AJ and Dashie as they pine over Rarity which lead to some fun conversations. I would love to see a story with Rarity being the POV with someone like Fluttershy and her watching AJ and Dashie working out at the gym.