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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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This story is a sequel to The Pony and the Yak


(Takes place before "The Ending of the End". Familiarity with the prequel is strongly recommended, though not required.)

Yona and Sandbar have been a couple for quite a long time now, and are preparing to go on their first true date together. Both know that a first date means a lot.

Sandbar decides to get some advice from the only one of his professors to have any experience in romance and the same professor who helped Yona "Fit In". Meanwhile, Yona makes some last minute preparations of her own.

What sort of advice will Rarity have to offer Sandbar? And will it be the kind of advice that Sandbar can benefit from?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Nice job too answer your question in author's note yes more Yonabar is 100% needed.

Also I noticed 1 small spelling error

"B-but, Yona! I'm... I'm not prepared!" The earth pony cult stuttered and blushed. "I haven't made any arrangements! This is all so sudden!"

you wrote cult instead of colt also I would think Sandbar is old enough to be classed as a stallion rather than a colt but maybe I'm wrong

Wonder when is he going to invite Yona to his family?

Hillbe #3 · Sep 5th, 2020 · · 3 ·

:pinkiehappy: Spikey & Rara, Yona & Sandy. Twilight and a book...
:twilightsmile: I'm taking notes on inter species relationships
:pinkiegasp: Yakonies & Draconies!
:raritystarry: So soon? We're not yet betrothed. . .
:facehoof: I'm still on the first page
:pinkiesmile: You can skip a few chapters
:twilightoops:

Well, you're not wrong.

Omg thats so sweet and love a sandbar and yona story 😍 nice job man

yes
continue to spread happyness like you did here

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