The domain of Tartarus is a wild and sometimes incomprehensible wasteland and its creatures are just as bizarre. A strange presence from this horrible place has manifested itself inside of the refrigerator of a certain animal expert in Ponyville. Weird creatures start flying out of it, and it is up to the resident magical genius and her incredibly shy friend to fix everything before it is too late. This is a story of a horrifying necromancer, a dog that has a tendency to burst into flames, and a demonic fridge.
Seems like an... interesting start. Didn't notice any major errors, although the scene with Berry her dialogue seemed a bit off for a pony just woken up, combined with just blandly stating that it was her inn.