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Fabulosity


Welcome! I enjoy writing fictions based upon the the human side of MLP, that both contain normal and erotic content. I hope you enjoy!

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During the great winters feast, Twilight Sparkle and the others have been enjoying their time together. However, Twilight has been challenged to a new game of cards by an unknown challenger. A game that was solely created in Canterlot for the use and enjoyment of unicorn ponies. Though the challenger has yet to be identified, will Twilight emerge victorious? Only the results of battle will tell.

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Comments ( 15 )

WOOHOO!!! ANOTHER STORY!!!

#3 · Dec 20th, 2011 · · ·

the heart of the cards:rainbowlaugh:yu-gi-oh reference!!!!! lol

It's time to.. D-D-D-D...DDDDDDUUEEL! Sorry, I had to.:pinkiecrazy:

Trixie coming in Ponyville to attack Twilight and Twi kicking her ass. Wow, how terribly original of you. And that wonderful character development... oh wait, there's NO character development. Just deus ex machina with reflection card, flat characters with only purpose to show Twilight Sparkle in her best. What a waste of time. It would've been interesting with more mature and clever Trixie and if Trixie actually won - she IS stage magician, she knows her shit. shows - her strong suit. Twi can't think fast on her hooves, and Trix defeated AJ, Rarity, Dash and didn't even break a sweat.

But ofc you forgot all that and wrote another 'Twi wins Trixie loses' fic. Pff

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oh yes, i'm SO mad after readind hundredth fic about OOC Trixie coming to Ponyville and losing. Srsly. It's so overused i didn't even felt anything :trixieshiftleft: "Of Mares and Magic" executed that plot nice, "Kindness' Reward" was not so bad, "Trixcord" kinda interesting, "Subject of Revenge", "Major Problems"... but this? What's the point of writing overused cliche without even adding something new? I'm hammoxed.

#8 · Dec 21st, 2011 · · ·

A Yu-gi-oh pony crossover? GAH! MY CHILDHOOD!!
I "wut?" so hard i stopped 2/3 in and took a break before reading the rest.
Yet another purpose for the phrase "You've activated my Trap card!"
Good job though.
Brohooves all around.
0.0 /)(\ 0.0

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Don't take it personally. I just read, like, thousands of fics and overused plots always bore and irritate me. I read plenty of "Twi owns Trixie" but NO fic, I repeat, NO FIC with Trixie owning Twilight. Or that "Dash broke her wing" with "Twilight botched a spell". "Human in Equestria" also one of cliche that very few can write interesting and non-predictable like "human comes, everypony confused, human befriends, SOMETHING TERRIBLE HUMAN SAVES HAPPY END"

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Yes I can understand where you are coming from. I wanted to write alittle something for each of the mane-six before I started on the others such as Trixie, Octavia and so-on and so-forth. So, naturally I wanted them to be the 'victor' in their own little story, but thanks for the feedback. :raritywink:

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Okay, I'll wait when you'll write about Trixie)

What a great story. Yugioh and MLP FiM go together like peanut butter and jelly in my opinion.:pinkiehappy:

:ajbemused: I won't be impressed until they play ON MOTORCYCLES:moustache:

I am a pro duelist and this made no sense, but was cute

It's time to duel!!!!

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