After receiving a letter from Princess Cadence, Rainbow Dash is set of to help the Crystal Empire with what they call, a serious situation. At first the rainbow mare claimed that the situation would be quick and easy, turns out the empire's ponies have other things in mind for her. Surprises that make her feel very welcomed.
Includes: lots of lovey-dovey Soarindash moments, teen rated sex, Flurry Heart seeing Rainbow Dash as her second mom, (maybe even permanent), sickness, pregnancy, and lots of other things I'm probably forgetting.
Chapters (7)
Great cute chapter
I can’t wait for more
Honestly, the only complaint I have for this story is that there’s no explanation for the power behind RD’s lullaby.
When the letter first mentioned it, I was thinking “Wait? What?”
Other than that, nicely done.
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Yeah, seems like a dumb power to give her lullaby is more Fluttershy's thing. I just don't find the initial issue believable
Continue?
Will there be more? Please??
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Yeah, sorry. School’s kept me busy. I’ll be back as soon as I can.
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It's ok, take your time. I just wanted to know if there will be more.
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No, no. It’s fine. I was working on it yesterday during my free time. FINALLY!!
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Yeyy!! Ok then!!
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I'm hoping to finish the next chapter either today or tomorrow.
I'm also reading other stories to get some ideas on what to put in but I believe that I have my mind set and ready on what I'm going to write.
This weekend for sure. I'm ready to get this chapter done and I have a feeling that I will definitely finish this chapter because it's been driving me nuts.
My god! I need a break from this.
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You don't have to hurry! Take your time, we can wait for your story
Great chapter!
Thanks. I wasn’t trying to hurry. I was just sick is still having that chapter up and not finished.
Where is new chapter?
Great chapter!
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Heh. thanks. That one came faster than I thought.
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You’re welcome!
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Glad you like it. :)
Poor Soarin.
This chapter is adorable
Great chapter!
Should Rainbow and Soarin have left a note or speak to Spitfire before leaving?
Great chapter!
Are we going to see Cadence and Shining Armor again?
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I agree. They're cute.
Great chapter!
Thanks. It took a while to put that last bit together, but I’m happy it worked out well in the end.
Cute chapter
Great chapter!
Is this story going to boost up a rating?
Cute chapter
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Since you're one of the first people to respond to my work, would you mind giving me an idea of what to write next? I think that would be very helpful. Thx.
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On my blog post, there are story ideas that I did in hopes others can adapt them to the site and make them great. If you like, you can adapt one or more free of charge. There might be others who one day may write the same story idea that you may write that came from from one of my story ideas. There’s already one author who may adapt one of ideas on the site and that was a long time ago, but it might still happen. If you’re going to adapt one or more of my story ideas, please make it good where it’ll get a lot of good/positive ratings.
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Thanks
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You’re welcome! Thank you!
Where’s my “Romantic scenes special” barf bag? Great story!
But why isn’t Rainbow being more like herself?
Btw, please make a scootadopt or a scootalove story in the future!
I like it!
cute
When next update??
update
