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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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“If God came down on Christmas Day,/I know exactly what he'd say,/He'd say ‘oi to the punks and oi to the skins,/But oi to the world and everybody wins!’” -The Vandals, ‘Oi To The World’

After staying for extra lessons during the winter break, Gallus along with the rest of his friends head out to a bar in Ponyville to enjoy Hearth’s Warming Eve together. But their celebration is cut short by a scuffle with some visitors.

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A bit smaltzy, and I definitely think the fight ends too quick, given what happens in it, but overall it worked. I would probably switch 'Oh my goodness' from Yona to either Silverstream or Ocellus, but otherwise, good.

Silverstrean also chimed in, “Yeah, Michelangelo and Lefty want to keep fighting!”

Lol Michelangelo because you know tmnt lol 😆

Smiling at the newly formed group of friends, Ocellus answered, “If you look for the good in others, I’m always sure you can find it. This world can be a bit frightening and sad, but being kind to one another makes it a lot less scary. And sometimes, we all just need to be reminded that we all can use a little love from one another.”

That is a very true words Ocellus 😊

Dang everything just escalated so quickly but anyway gallus and his friends celebrating their hearths warming eve at the bar to hang out with each other cuz school is out and have a chance to hang out but things did not go as they plan because there are five Griffons who just stormed in at first they just minding their business but then they saw gallus and these punks try to mess with him and his friends and that was some fight they went through plus who the heck goes around and hitting kids especially on the holidays but anyway Ocellus came between a group of Angry Creatures and tell them what they're doing is wrong and they should not fight it's the holiday season so with all the words that she put out very heartwarming to they decided not to fight anymore and the Griffons apologized for their actions and even invited them to the bar again to celebrate this was a pretty good story keep up the good work merry Christmas and happy holidays

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