While exploring the universe, Adora, Catra, Bow, Glimmer, Entrapta, Scorpia and Swift Wind get sucked into a portal and land in Equestria. While there, The Best Friend Squad and Mane Six discover an old foe has returned and is bent on conquering the universe and more. Can all of the heroes work together and stop the threat? Let's find out.
I'm really liking this story, but I do actually have a bit of a caveat.
This:
I mean, seriously?
The thing, tree-shaped or not, is a freakin' CASTLE!
Have you NOT seen just how BIG that thing is?!
I'm PRETTY sure that it actually WOULD have enough rooms IN it to have room for a half-dozen (or so) extra guests!
Granted they could've stayed there but I also wanted to split people up to stay with the ponies. I guess I could've made a better excuse
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I enjoy the story but it was kind of rushed.
but good work on the story.
hope for a sequel
Good