In a harsh Equestria of great plains, deserts, and rocky mountains, it's a time where the only thing that can be called justice is the gun on your hip.
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Let’s get this stuff out of the way:
Aside from your normal grammatical mistakes (which don’t bother me too much), and some “Men writing women” paragraphs; most egregiously this one...
This story was really good. I could totally see this being an introduction to a much longer and more epic Western-themed story. I liked the character’s personalities quite a bit.
It makes me want to write my Cowpony Guitarist story again.
This is what I call a good western story here! Call me interested! I even like the style of guns you have Celestia carryin'
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Thank you for both the praise and criticism. Obviously this is something totally different from what I usually write, I never thought I would write an "M" rated story to begin with and I wanted to see how I did writing something with actual violence and a slight bit more sexuality. Although there's a reason there isn't a Sex tag up there, it won't get explicit.
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Thank you! Plenty more to come.
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I look forward to what is to come! I always enjoy a good western. And I'm also a firearm collector
Celestia tracking down Luna in a Western AU? Hell yeah.
Finally started reading this one after catching up with others. Oooooh boy now I can't stop singing Big Iron
Lookin forward to more, pardner!