Snips and snails and puppy dog tails, that's what little colts are made of. Snails is a stallion now, so where does that leave him?
Careful today, here tomorrow.
Snips and snails and puppy dog tails, that's what little colts are made of. Snails is a stallion now, so where does that leave him?
Excellent use of symbolism here, A+
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Thank you, I appreciate it!
It's drabbly, but I like it. I think you did a great job giving Snails depth. Also, I'm getting Soul vibes from this story, not a ton but some.
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A lot of my writing tends to be like that, I struggle a lot with clear-cut plots, especially endings, but I hope I can become better at it. Also dang, I really do need to get around to watching that movie huh? Thanks for the feedback!
There’s nothing wrong with taking it one day at a time.
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Sure it's not always perfect, but different people need different advice.
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My bad, I think i typed my comment wrong.
My criticism is that this is too darn sweet and it gave me feelings