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Magic student huh

So here's my question. Why are people so obsessed with the idea alicorns are hermaphrodites? I know it's a commission, so I don't blame you.

Jest #4 · Mar 12th, 2021 · · ·

10719674
Because its the easiest excuse to give em a donger.

10719674

I think it's the idea that alicorns represent all three tribes equally, so the leap to also representing both sexes equally isn't too far afield.

Or, as 10719686, it's just a nice hand-wave to give 'em giant peeners.

I'm honestly a little disappointed that there wasn't a scene of Celestia and/or Luna either showing that they have dicks and wondering why Twilight hadn't brought having one up to them yet, or that they don't have them, thus Twilight is uniquely going through this and has no idea that they wouldn't be any help even if she did ask. Still, this is a good story, very sexy but also funny. Always fun to watch Twilight of all ponies deal with sexual situations.

10719729
The patron had initially wanted like 10 or so chapters that would see the other princesses involved but due to budgetary concerns, it needed to be cut down to one chapter.

10719804
Woah, that is a massive divide between original intent and outcome (whistles). I understand the point of course, that could easily lead to issues.

I was also disappointed with the self-impregnation being just a one time mention, since that was the reason I clicked it. Just thought I'd mention that too. Does give me the idea to maybe write something with that prominently in it though, someday.

10719811
Well the commissioner mentioned that he may return to it when their money issues were resolved so if that happens it will be much more focused on that.

10719837
Hopefully I don't miss it if that happens...

10719841
It'll be a sequel if that happens.

10719842
That sequel so needs to happen.

I think this may have been the best clop I've ever read on this site. Usually I'm a hypercritical know-it-all who leaves paragraphs of criticisms, but this was beyond that: this is perfection.

10720667
Indeed it shows a mastery of psychology and shows us how Twilight feels instead of just telling us how she feels, with her actions, not just her thoughts or the writer's direct statements.

Even as it pooled underneath her head, leaving her lying face first in a puddle of her own thick, sticky spunk, there was a wide, immeasurably happy smile that never left her face. It was the unmistakable smile of a mare that has discovered her one true destiny.

Her destiny to give birth to a village entirely made of herself.

nice work

Alcorn of love move over the alicorn of self love is here.

Also, this demands a sequel to explain how the other alicorns deal with it.

I know this goes against the porn but...

Her balls had also managed to be squeezed through the portal as well, leaving her crotch truly flat once again.

now would be a good time to cut the portal....

Well-done!

10722691
For whatever reason, I'm reasonably sure that they have something very similar going on... ;]
Also, it'd be pretty fucking awful if Celestia and Luna did each other, wouldn't it be?

10723769
The thought did cross my mind...

I would like to see the foal. I’m curious to see if it would be just a clone of Twilight.

One thing is a shame though, you established that the portal has a limited range. I could have easily seen this take off as a mini series or multi chapter solo story where Twilight's sex addled mind thought of casting portals around Equestria where her massive marecock would be available anonymously for curious/perverted mares/stallions to use. No announcement and each day would be moved somewhere else. The thought of her friends, acquaintances, relatives or even the other princesses using it without knowing it was Twilight's is such a turn on, especially if say it led to Flurry Heart actually being Twilight's daughter (which would explain her huge amount of backed up magic ability), or her mother/brother pleasuring themselves on her cock. The number of mares she could impregnate anonymously would be limitless. The semi conflict (but quickly resolved with maybe a harem outcome) could be when someone who has seen Twilight's cock first hand (By spying or an accidental temporary failure of her concealment spell) figures out that it is her cock that has been popping up all over Equestria.

I know people might say that I should take a shot at writing this myself, but I am more of an idea person. I would love to write it, but my shortcomings are things like dialogue without it getting repetitive. That's why I only have 1 story.

On another note. I was slightly sad that Twilight didn't discover the joy of fucking her own Ponut.

I would like to say though, that I have been finding your works very enjoyable and you certainly deserve the praise your readers give you.

11451030
What if twilight found a way to extend the range

Now you're thinking with portals~
Great tale! Until next time!

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