Synopsis: There was a terrible tragedy in a mountainous neighborhood. Ace, the main character of the story was shot. And was reincarnated, starting a new ridiculous life in Equestria.
He's finally living in a life where something in his old life doesn't exists.
(Note: this is a remastered cersion of the Ctrl + Shift series. The title doesn't makes sense, and I decided to delete the old story.
If you see some grammar errors, please forgive me, I just go with the flow and I don't have an editor. I just put some words and sentences that makes sense and easy to read.
There are violence in bossfight chapters, and mild violence such as hitting the head with a frying pan in regular chapters.
And also, I don't use some fancy words in this fanfic. I don't really use them and It's hard to read and understand to others. And I will write the story on my perspective.)
Alternate Title: [Ga Ekuesutoria Nii Sekai] [が えくえすとりあ に い せかい]
First story, congrats!
soloquotes.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/08/Motivational-Quotes-Stay-Amazing.jpg
10771110
thanks man, I just got this idea when I asked myself. "What if I got reincarnated to equestria?"
This is Amazing Ace
nice story
This story dont follow any logic... Is that a gag character story? Or in other word: Discord is being himself and/or Pinkie Pie gona Pinkie.
What I'm currently doing right now is setting a stage for the next and future chapters. And yes, it's probably obvious who will come in Ponyville...
chapter 1, chapter 2, chapter 4?
10793238
sry typo lol
They also can manipulate their manes and tails, but that's beside the point, I suppose.
Don't forget that they can control the weather and walk on clouds.
10794833
well, i do know that... i just forgot lol. anyways, thanks for pointing out my mistake.
1: I honestly preferred Breezy Shy from The Great Alicorn Hunt
2: That bit about a bento reminds me of Food Wsrs season 2 episode 1.
Typically made of Tamahagane, but whatever.
The fastest, anyway.
#shineonharvestmoon
i regret the fact that the bossfight scene is very short. oof.
MINECRAFT NOOOOOO!
10801051
lets just hope that this won't happen
Personally, I would suggest Spellfire by Ed Greenwood.
Isn't boss fight two words?
Cheerilee used Word of Command.
The Rising of the Shield Hero.
tbh, i just realized that this fanfic is a shitpost because i didn't write this crap seriously. im just having fun playing with words.
This is why I really hate katana in fiction.
Well... This fic is like basic concept of isekai anime.
10871467
lmao because it is
10872709
Oi same concept with me except.. mine is opposite and mine don't yell the name of skill in battle
That promotion was way too fast
Depending on whose depiction you're using, they're kind of like Druids with boosted STR and CON scores. They also have more control of their manes and tails than do the other pony subspecies.
They're kind of like Sorcerers.
They can also control the weather, don't forget.
Not exactly taking lessons from Soma Yukihira, but still good, I imagine.
And we all know rule number one when it comes to Pinkie Pie: don't question it. You'll only give yourself a headache, and you still won't understand.
It only counts if you crack/break it.
Do you really have to ask?
She is wrooooong~.
The nice thing about Applejack's family is that she could list both them and the items on the "menu" at the same time.
Go on; play that classic clip.
To paraphrase Ron Stoppable, "do what I say, and you might survive to see the day."
It close to time
This is among the worst chapters I read in my entire life. And I read pretty bad stuff being completely honest. Before I get mad and start complaining I want to ask some things. Why in the face of the Earth do you decide to make the OC appear in the childhood of some of the main characters to then do nothing with that?! This thing is the definition of Tell don't show, "She says yes but I need to pay fifty bits for that. And I humbly paid it.", "I told Mr. and Mrs. Shy". This just sounds as if someone was talking about some news in a resumed version for someone else.
Also got to love how the magic Alicorn can just decide to bring people for no reason, and he apparently decided to be the personal information Buttler of MC for no reason. He also randomly brings another character because Author decided to. That "he" has no motivation, no driving force, no compelling character, he is just a tool to be used by the author for convenience's sake.
And the last point, why set up things if there is no payoff?!? You decided to make him have some talk with Rarity and then set him up going for the boutique and the payoff was 3 lines. And more, it was completely useless, you could have deleted that and it would have made no difference, you might as well have said "And I also got to know a white-colored mare by the name of Rarity" because that's the only end result of that. That jacket will *never* appear again.
Also, the "Comedy" is laughable. Ironic, I know. A weaboo screaming in Japanese? Really? That's your idea of comedy? And right after the "sad" scene about them dying? DECIDE YOUR TONE, you can have comedy in a sad story (i.e Clannad and Kanon are good examples) but the speed at which this alternates is just plain bipolarity. I'm honestly really disappointed, the only moment I honestly laughed was when the instructor decided to expel all four of them instead of trying to logically assume both sides were in the wrong, that was a good break of expectation, especially when I imagined his voice being all drill sergeant-like.
Dang this Fanfiction is Entertaining to Read 📚
Damb the ROAST!
Oof their Broke
I'm confused about where this protagonist is from. The lifestyle and food indicate he is from Japan or a nearby country, but the mention of pesos indicates he is Hispanic because Japan uses yen. Maybe the author forgot to fix that one detail