This is the tale of a particular Shaman, of which has no relation to the writer what so ever, whom has to face the consequences of her curiosity as she explores a recently uncovered titan stronghold. Having been judged by the Titan pantheon, she and her party members are sent to a different universe, however being promised a way back to Azeroth if they can complete the task of Norgannon, the master of Magic. What his task is, however, is not something he wishes to share with the party.
How will they fare in their new universe? Only time can tell.
AN:
Uhm... Yeah, tags may vary as this story is hardly written. It is my first fiction... So... Gently pleaaaase~
Chapters (2)
Bro I need to stop you right here.
I don't want you getting busted up over this. It's good. It really is.
How will everypony ELSE take it though?
Might want to start simple and move up until the community knows and likes you.
Right now, I'm seeing some grammar mistakes which happens, but also, a wall of text. Work on spacing/indenting/more defined paragraph changes.
Don't get discouraged...just start smaller.
TRANSFORMICE!!!
Well, there are a few grammar errors, but here's the major problem I see for a story like this on a site like this: not enough ponies.
Honestly, I only skimmed most of the first chapter, but from what I could tell, it all takes place in Azeroth. The writing isn't bad, and I was able to follow most of it (having played WoW in the past). Unfortunately, the people here expect ponies and won't want to read through 7,000 words just to find them.
Like Mandalorian said, it's not a bad idea, but it probably won't go over well here.
Best of luck.
Oh wow, people actually read this? Huh... I honestly didn't think anyone would. That's cool.
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I'm used to writing in word, it looks so much nicer in there :c
Also, I'm bad at starting small. I have all these great ideas floating around in my head... It might be worthy of noting that most of chapter 1 was written while I was sick in my bed, trying to kill time... None-the-less! I see your point, but have no idea how to write short stories! :D
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To be fair, the first chapter was more of a prologue than anything, if only just to set a setting... But yeah, I can see what you're saying. AND, I was actually planning out chapter 3 to actually introduce other ponies than... You know... The OC... But yeah. A 7k work prologue might be quite a lot for people who don't really have an interest in WoW, unless it's awesomely written (Which I know that I am not... I just wrote this for the luls, and in an attempt to voice my inner thoughts! :D).
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Noooot entirely sure what to reply to you with....
Trixie does not approve of this incredibly obvious attempt to shake off claims of self insert.