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Art Inspired


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Steam embarks on a quest as he seeks out the mysterious green light that took his love away from him years ago.

Inspired and based on the song "EYE of the STORM" by Lovett.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 59 )

I felt an uncontrollable urge to do this. It had to be satisfied.

Song lyrics...


I know that I'm wrong..
About everything I said.
But you knew goes again.
You wanted more,
Than you thought,
I would ever give.
But you were badly mistaken.

I told you lies,
And said what you were meant to hear,
Just as you wished.. my dear,
To reach the eye (eye, eye), of the storm.

So we begin to float,
And drifted out into the tide,
For every wave,
To swallow.. us alive.

No sign of shore,
The moment when the sails were torn.
We've reached the end.
Eye of the storm.

For all that it cost,
In the end there was no price to pay.
For all that was lost,
That storm carried it away.

Now, this may take some thought as I'm sure you can tell, it only has a basic style of plot and plan, so just give me a while to consider the first development, and we'll see where this goes.

1238886 do you have something against gay people?

1238886 GET OFF OF THIS SITE YOU HATER! HATERS GONNA HA- Wait, no. FUCK THAT, HATERS GONNA DIE MUTHAFUCKA!:pinkiecrazy: I don't know who you are, but I will find you, and I will kill you......

..1238886 FIRE UP THE OVEN PINKIE! WE'RE MAKING CUPCAKES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

I like it. The end seems a tad underdeveloped. But no spelling or grammar errors that I saw. Good work my fellow steampunk equestria lover.

You should read mine. i wont claim to be the best (that goes to ravens dagger), but i'm not half bad.
You should REALLY read 'Of Steam Gears and Wings' by this guy ^^^^^^^^. It is amazing:rainbowdetermined2:

1238933 I find it somewhat funny in an ironic that you decided to create an account on a fiction site created entirely for pony fanfiction, just to bash bronies.

1238951 Like I said.... FIRE UP THE MOTHERFUCKIN OVEN PINKIE PIE, WE'RE MAKIN' SOME MOTHERFUCKIN CUPCAKES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (i wonder if haters blood tastes any good?):pinkiecrazy:

1238997 Hey geuss what your 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1238997 What are those horses constipated or something?

1239024 Oh, look, your BANNED! Bye bye!

To all haters, don't mess with me! I am ART INSPIRED!

>> Bronies are fags dude what that doesn't even make sense :facehoof: just go for the love of all that is good just fucking go please:fluttershysad: :fluttercry: :applecry:

1239084 I got him banned, it's alright!

well now that exchange was unexpected

thank you art and how do respond to account thing also i needta stop procrastinating stupid lazy ass brain write clop for my SSP

1239111 idk about you, but i'm SO posting this in a god damn blog!

1239120wait our weird ass conversation? :rainbowhuh:

1239154 Just the incident that occurred with the hater, not our silly conversations! Silly hoofy

1239170 that makes vastly more sense at around one thirty my logic starts to fall apart :derpyderp2: :derpyderp1: :derpytongue2:

Snazy. I take it he will stay mostly a mute?
Not a lot of lines?

But so far so good. But I really liked that ship!
And it makes me think of this:

1238886
Dudobro, sticks and stones.

Hey just a quick thing.. is it supposed to be What is this thing? or is the What it this thing intentional? (Translation error, unused to method of commmunication etc.) Also, this fic it might be cuz i combined reading this with the song but, I like it please continue!

1239219 Unintentional Easter egg typo. Thanks for pointing it out.:twilightblush: It's been fixed... like a bad user who filled up the first comments and slandered my good name!:twilightangry2:

1239013
I can't believe you went through the hassle of making an account just to show your disdain for something you don't like. You've wasted your time trying to aggravate an entire community with your petty and not so well thought-out insults. You might have better spent your time actually getting a life instead of tainting ours with your presence.

You must truly have nothing better to do.


EDIT: Just realized you got banned. IN YOUR FACE!!!

breasts are nice I like breasts. I'd post some up but the comment would probably be removed.

Nice story btw, i await your next installment.

Ah, isn't it always fun to see those haters appear from their hidey holes? I swear, if direct sunlight ever lands on their skin, they would burst into flames.....

But anyway, as we all know!
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1238954 o-o um silver hoof... don't you um.. think that is a tad harsh? that isnt very nice.. even to haters :fluttershysad:

1238911 you really do appear to have something against gay people don't you?

1240149 All is fair in Love and Hate. Especially Hate.:ajbemused:

I saw the video when you posted the blog post yesterday.
I almost responded with a
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on that blog post, when i saw the video.

'This amount of badass must happen,' was pretty much my thoughts. Very nice by the way.

War

1240618
If I told him I was bisexual, his head would explode.

1239023 YES!!!!!!!! EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!

1240618 I like it. I'm a huge fan of steampunk, and often read fics on it. I like the song as well. I hope you continue on.

1248983 I will, but I'm very busy with other silly priorities.

Troll is trollness, lol anyway I really like this story so far and I wish to see more! :rainbowkiss:

Nice one but umm why would he know the plains he landed on were the "Canterlot Planes" and Celestia an alicorn, why not a winged unicorn or just "sexy looking horse" ? :rainbowlaugh:

Finally read it yeah. :rainbowlaugh:

1253855 It's a narration, and because of this, the details I give, I knew, but the reader is supposed to automatically infer the main character doesn't know anything about the place nor the being he just met.

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