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Raging Mouse


Small. Fuzzy. Irate.

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Twilight Sparkle thought to abuse harness the power of the crystal mirror to give her friends their ultimate vacations. She did expect them to bring souvenirs; she decidedly did not expect Fluttershy to bring back... friends? Pets? Eldritch abominations?

Events in Ponyville are about to get adorably, hideously, confusing.


This story is a gift to an altogether nice person whom I greatly appreciate. There is no plan, no outline and no ending set. As such, it will probably be eternally incomplete. Suggestions are welcome.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 26 )

This is a good story.
Cute too with the shenanigans that happen.

Comment posted by Cyrus Colter deleted Aug 27th, 2021

Is it too much to ask for one of the Tatzlponies in the world of EQG?
Or at least a surprise visit from Sunset for her reaction?

Comment posted by Cyrus Colter deleted Sep 11th, 2021

So, dumb question.
When will the next chapter be uploaded, if ever?
I really love this story and re-read it frequently.
I ask not from impatience but from curiosity.

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Next chapter will be published when I've planned and written it, and maybe checked it a couple times for errors.

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No worries. I had the previous chapters already written, so I could publish them quickly after another check for spelling and grammar. It's going to slow down now, though.

I still wanna see Sunset's reaction to the Tatzlponies.

As well as a Sunset Shimmer Tatzlpony.

Maybe send the latter into the world of the former.

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There's certainly potential comedy to be had in a meeting of (more) worlds. We'll see!

Tatzljack is acting kinda cute/silly here. Keep up the nice work.:twilightsmile:

so i'm guessing the next chapter will be out in time for Christmas at least.

Yeah.
This was worth the wait.

I'm just imagining one of those cartoon scenes where there's a character in a bag or a smoke cloud and you just see the deformations and hear noises and have to guess what's going on inside there.

Certainly an intriguing concept, monstrous alternates to the main cast being introduced. Unfortunately the vore is both personally off putting (hardly your fault just not my thing) and strangely integrated in such a way it is clearly not natural but given the curse in the setting still fits.

You are a skilled author an I wish you luck in your future endeavours this one just isn’t for me.

So.... Is there any news on this story?

Tatzlight stretched, bowing low and putting her forelegs in front of her. While in that pose, she shut her eyes and opened her tripartite maw into a massive yawn. Rarity, who happened to be standing right in front of the tatzlpony, realized she could see all the way down Tatzlight’s throat to where Twilight’s horn was glowing. A fraction of a second later Twilight raised her head enough to peer out and wave at Rarity. Then the yawn ended, hiding Twilight from view again. Tatzlight smacked her lips, tongues hanging low. Then she froze, eyes going wide. Twilight could still be heard mumbling inside her.

I am picturing a Cat with a hairball

Fluttershy hesitated before nodding. “Um. Yes. Of us all. And… um… some more besides.”

TatzPinkie will be the stuff of nightmares:facehoof:

Applejack turned to stare into Twilight's eyes. "Are you saying two ponies who look like Rainbow Dash and me, but with added tentacles, are loose in Ponyville? On market day? "

:facehoof:

Applejack opened her muzzle, but Pinkie seemed to fire off a sentence without breathing in. “The Positively Pinkietastic Partycracy of Pinkietron Alpha says ‘hi and thanks for letting your Pinkie Unit’—that’s me—’come stay at our dimension!’ They were so happy that they promised not to assimilate you even a little bit if you wanted to come visit, which they said you totally should! They’re baking cookies!”

Pinkie of the Borg

Twilight next awoke to general chatter. She opened her eyes and found herself lying on Rarity’s fainting couch in the middle of Fluttershy’s cottage. This immediately irritated her orderly nature with its redundancy. Fluttershy's own couch was currently unused, as all her friends clustered around… Twilight's counterpart from another dimension. Right . Couch-Twilight’s still-groggy mind had shuffled her list of priorities. Gripe about couches later.

Fluttershy's couch isn't a fainting couch so why would they put Twilight on Fluttershy's couch after she fainted?:pinkiesmile:

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Yes but Rarity 's is a "fainting couch". They were designed to put someone who fainted on.

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