This story is a sequel to The Story of a Royal Guard [OUTDATED]
The Story of a Royal Guard series has been completely rewritten for the sake of quality, making this outdated. See The Guard And His Sword for the updated and higher quality story!
This fic will remain for the sake of still retaining the source material.
Hehe, great chapter.
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Thanks! I hope the future ones are even better.
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No problem, hes a good OC, also. Enjoy a follow, you've earned it.
Oh boy, next chapters going to be a good un as well .
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We'll have to see about that, there's only so much I can do with So Many Pinkies, but I'll try and get some craziness in.
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Good luck, all I can say.
Stars be disappearing eh? Getting good!
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Indeed, it's quite ominous. We'll have to see if he ever notices or not, but something strange is definitely going on.
Interesting, looking forward to seeing what the cause of it will be.
Also at first glance, I thought the chapter was called 'Return to Slender' .
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I couldn't come up with any good chapter name so I just slabbed on a Halo reference for the name, heheheh. I'm not that great at coming up with chapter names.
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Same here, I tend to try and relate it to whats happening in the story or just taking a specific line from the story and using that.
Aaah, some answers. Wonderful, keep up the good work!
The only thing I took from this chapter is that it is now 1st person............and
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I just had to make that reference, when you have a change changing magic sword you just gotta turn it into an Iron Pony suit! Although it wouldn't be as effective, because no lasers and hardly any flexibility.
Oh god. CMC Royal guard.....
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Not if Lieutenant Arrow has anything to say about it! (He's not that great of a tracker actually)
Oh Dear Celestia Luna and Faust..............Cutie Mark Crusader Royal Guards.......
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Yeah, I haven't been here for a while, but I'm back now!
Yeah, give the sword to Twilight,there's a good idea!!
Well that was just plain stupid.
See lots of Pinkie Pies. Leaves.
Good idea!! Something tells me dad is jealous, and that is why he is a bit..........sorry, a big asshole..
Interesting............and why can't we have another chapter with Katana in it?
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BASELESS THEORY TIME!!! I haven't had one of these for a while!!!
Stars are going missing. Got a pissed off spirit in his sword's crystals. Spirit is causing the condition making him lose the stars.
So what do I win?
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"Fun! Fun! Fun! Fun! Fun! Fun!"
"... nopenopenope."
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Well it's not a bad theory, though not necessarily what I was going for there. BUT it is helping the problem, even though it's not the direct cause.
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She'll come back. I think in the last chapter I'm gonna bring quite a bit back. I'm also tempted to write a bit of a spin-off that focuses on her instead. Swordulan not the only Shield in the family that has a couple of interesting adventures.
Still going to slap his dad, even if Discord was behind it.
And, yes, you don't want to piss of Luna! Now, go kill some Diamond Dogs! Not negotiate with, not ignore, KILL!
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His dad gets what's coming to him. Oh yes... he had it coming for a long time...
As for those Diamond Dogs well... they'll probably get lucky. Swordy ain't too fond of having to save his annoying cousin.
Great work, looking forward to more in the future.
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As am I! Luckily there's still plenty of writing to be done before the new season begins to help pass the time.
You're not even going to be with your mother at this time? Back of the hoof, coming your way.
Ah, there's the spent .50 cal case......well, time to leave Manehatten....
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Well she seemed to want to be left alone after what happened, and she still thought he was with the 'Guard more than likely. It's possible she was more worried about what he was doing than herself.
And at the same time, Swordy didn't feel like there was much of a point in staying.
Good story. I can't wait to read the third part. Good luck with it.
I don't even get why people read and liked this story it's written so badly aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.