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Shortly after the last case in Appaloosa, Private and Twilight go on a date in Manehattan. Their new found love is young though...anything could ruin it if they aren't careful. Twilight wants to know why a stallion like Private would fall for a mare like her. What she finds out might not be what she expected.

A simple side story that really just explores the relationship that Private and Twilight have.

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Bahahaha, I love Potso. I want him to move to Ponyville and follow everyone around with his accordian.

Aside from a few grammar mistakes, nothing wrong with this sidestory! Great work!

I'm guessing Cadence will give birth in another side story, Or be mentioned in a case?

1246628I'm the person in the camp that believes that that recent toy called "Princess Skyla" is Cadence's daughter. I'm not sure when Cadence will give birth to her but it won't be for a while

1246628As for Potso....I don't know if he'll move to ponyville but it would be incredibly funny if he became sort of like Pinkie Pie and randomly appear with this accodian

1246648 Princess Skyla? When did that toy come out?

1247053Look on EQD there are some articles about her

Lol I'd love to see that. Some romantic moment occuring. *Potso pops up* THIS CALLS FOR AN ACCORDIAN!!!

1248703Oh gosh if this series ever gets popular that will become a meme...

1267666*hands tissue to you*

LOL "Disa calls for an ACCORDION!"

Vinyl Scratch pulls one out: "Let's JAM, dude!"

1296169Oh gosh the accordion strikes again!

Great chapter for most of it I couldn't stop laughing

Did anyone else think "The Lady and the Tramp"?

2675147That was the point, it is a parody of Lady and the Tramp

Lady and the Tramp is my all time favourite Disney movie. Good job with this

I saw the Lady and the Tramp references from the very name of this fic. Great job! :eeyup:

1296169 I see someone likes the Vinyl Scratch Tapes

I freaking KNEW Potso was based on Mario when you first described him in a previous story. All but confirmed with a Rule 63 Luigi pony as his younger sister.

I didn’t know that a piece of cheese stuck the pieces together. As Twilight and I dug into our respective pieces we casually pulled on that link of cheese. Slowly but surely I chewed on that cheese until…I got to the end and found myself kissing Twilight.

We broke off the kiss and she smiled shyly at me. I gently nuzzled her cheek and found my tail falling on hers. I then heard Potso bust out his accordion and sing in that tenor voice of his.

For this is the night…

It’s a beautiful night….

And we call it Belle Notte…

Lady and the Tramp:rainbowlaugh:

Nice reference to that comic

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