It was an average day, Zipp was out practicing her parkour skills when she happened to come across a pretty cool-looking stone. That stone's previous owner was one very special pony... a pony who once was, but now is.
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Oh, I'd thought this be after the movie. But hope she able to get back to meet Sunny and others.
So it looks like the Elements of Harmony have scattered around Equestria it would be very interesting if the elements of harmonies if it's been found by the main five
I like this concept and would like to see more of this.
Okay this is pretty interesting so far so this is before My Little Pony new generation and before Sunny and Izzy came along but it looks like Zipp really wanted to know how to fly by using the mountains as air support but after a little crash landing she found a stone but not just any stone it was a shape of a lightning she brought it home of course her mother got worried where she was including pipp and she even notice the stone but it looks like it was activated when it hit the ground and Zipp was trying to find a way to stop it but it looks like the stone is calling out for her when she touched it it looks like she's going through time and I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time
I'd love to see this continued. Don't see a lot of stories set before the movie.
Can't wait to see what's next... Does Zipp go back in time and meet Rainbow Dash?
I can’t wait to see what you got in store for this story.
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6 elements for 5 ponies
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I mean I'm sure somebody will find it hopefully somebody trustworthy
This is a really good start so far! Nice work!
Can you continue this story, i want to see what happens next.
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I am, progress is just a bit slow since I don't really have much free time with school and all.
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It’s fine, just take your time.
Oh this has good bones and I would like to see more. One quick note, where you have
Sometimes it helps distinguish thoughts if you italicize them. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Interesting start.
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im interested.
i want to see more
HEY!
YOU GOTTA LET IT GLOW!
HEY!
YOU GOTTA LET IT SHINE!
HEY!
SHOW ME HOW YOU SPARKLE!
EVERYPONY UNITE!
HEY!
YOU GOTTA LET IT GLOW!
HEY!
YOU GOTTA LET IT SHINE!
SHOW ME HOW YOU SPARKLE!
EVERYPONY UNITE!
Hoof to heart
Let's make our mark
Our cutie marks
Help find our sparks.
Glowing bright with
Inner light.
We make our
Mighty friends all right.
oh
Lets make our mark together.
Just riding on FOREVER.
Just keeps on getting better better
BETTER!
🎶🎵🎶🎶🎵🎶🎶🎶
EVERYPONY EVERYWHERE!
YOU CAN FEEL IT IN THE AIR!
FIND YOUR SPARK AND JUST GLOW AND SHINE!
MAKE A MARK THAT YOU CAN SHARE!
HOOF TO HEART YOU KNOW WE
CARE!
oh ponies come on
LETS ALL UNITE!!
Tail Shakin Hoof Stompin
on the floor (yeah)
Honna make our mark
Some more.
Shining cutie marks Galore
And let's hoof stomp right out the door!
Lets make our mark together.
Just riding on FOREVER
Just keeps on getting better better
BETTER.
EVERYPONY EVERYWHERE!
YOU CAN FEEL IT IN THE AIR!
FIND YOUR SPARK
JUST GLOW AND SHINE!
MAKE A MARK THAT YOU CAN SHARE!
HOOF TO HEART YOU KNOW WE
CARE!
oh ponies come on!
LETS ALL UNITE!
Lets all unite!!!
🎶🎶🎵🎶🎶🎶🎶🎵🎶
Ponies unite
Everypony make your mark
And find your glowing spark.
You can do it
Hoof to heart.
Our bright Inner Light
Gonna let it glow
Gonna let it shine.
Gonna show you how
I SPARKLE
Bring it in now
LETS UNITE, LETS UNITE, LETS UNITE!
Everypony everywhere
You can feel it in the air
Find your spark and just
Glow and SHINE!
MAKE A MARK THAT YOU CAN SHARE!
HOOF TO HEART YOU KNOW WE
CARE!
ponies come on!
LET'S ALL UNITE!
EVERYPONY EVERYWHERE!
YOU CAN FEEL IT IN THE AIR!
FIND YOUR SPARK JUST GLOW AND SHINE!
MAKE A MARK THAT YOU CAN SHARE!
HOOF TO HEART YOU KNOW WE
CARE!❤
ponies come on
LETS ALL UNITE!!
BECAUSE FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC!
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Nice man the theme song is pretty catchy
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im interested
Did you update the tags?
not a bad start, all told
i'd like to see where this goes
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️