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Dracthul


I am your worst fear, your worst nightmare, and your best friend all at once. I am the God of Death, I am Yogg-Saron…

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An archaeological dig in the Crystal Empire uncovers an ancient tomb built by the three pony tribes—long before they united as one. Its design is foreign, and the warnings are written in an ancient language. A full expedition into the tomb starts, but the ponies uncover a creature that was never supposed to be awoken. Supposed to be trapped in this tomb and forgotten for eternity, this creature is none other than the Alien…

As it ravages the empire, as well as Equestria, all hope to contain their plague-like spread seems lost, until Twilight Sparkle follows the Friendship Map to a remote location. What she finds is the only creature that can stop the horrors unleashed, but it itself is alien.

This creature is the Predator.


Yep, crossover of the Alien and Predator universes with MLP: FIM.
I own none of these three franchises (obviously).

Enjoy!

**Featured sometime recently (I put this part in on 10/13/21)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 38 )

I'm actually thinking of writing a story like this but with the ponies and their friends having to ally with Wolf from AVP 2 and the predators to stop the aliens when they infest parts of Equestria.

Damn fine start.

A Predator hunting party is normaly 3 Members.
Are you going for a full group or just one Predator?

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Just one, but he is super equipped and skillful so he can hopefully save the world

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So hes a Elder or a One Predator cleaning squad?
Like that one in the movie removing Predator and Alien remnants and unfortunately dying to the Predalien...

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Imma be honest, I don’t know a lot about Predator lore and stuff like that. He is basically a powerful and respected Predator who was sent down to investigate the strange planet of Equus. He was the only Predator to come to Equestria, and he had the pyramid constructed so he could enjoy his private hunts. He was fundamental in keeping ponies alive as a species. Should the aliens ever get out of hand, the ponies were supposed to awake him so he could stop them before they got out the temple, but over time the ponies forgot about him and the temple.

Sorry if I don’t know the terminology, but I hope that shed some light on his status.

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Its a AU and than lore conflicts are less dramatic.
On youtube you can see a lot of comics and learn the lore but here is a little base knownlege:
- Predators have like humans two genders but the females are apperently bigger in some cases.
Predators live 1000+ years but not mutch longer than a millenium.
- Predators blood is green and protects em almost entirely against illness.
- Predators blood seem to make other species healthyer and even prolongs lifespan if they come into contact or purposely pump Predator blood as addition into there bloodstream.
- Unblooded Predators are basicly like there Teen stage in there culture no matter if they 100-300 years old. Normaly a special right of hunt is preformed to become blooded and there for become a adult.
- Predators have problems in cold environmental conditions that why there body has a steelcable like net on there body to regulate via heating there temperatur.
- They prefer to hunt on hot planets or hot seasons on a planet.
- Predators tech between clan can be very different.
- Predators dont like being saved by others... Dying in a hunt is a high honor... Yet some dont seem to see it to tight.
- Predators have a code of honor. Its basicly:
The higher the treat, the bigger the price of a tropy.
Never kill the pregnant or the unarmed/Civilian ( Exception is if they actively become a interfering factor.
- Predators children/Babys are called 'Sucklers'
- Predator ( Also called Yautia ) use melee weapons prefered to give themself a challange.
Unless Plasma and other long range weapons are nessesary do to being waaay in the deep end do to many enemys/attacker or they are wounded.
- Predators breath a special mix of that is different from humans.
- Predators without mask see in the Infrared Spektrum.
- They collect tropys ( head/spine etc. of worthy prey )
- They come in many skin colors...
- Predators are omnivores but preferred seem to be meat.
- They can imitate sound and speak like a parrot to taunt or confuse / lure prey into traps ...
- Predators that aknownlage some other as great hunters might mark there ally with there clan symbol and give away a weapon as sign of respect.
- Predators with a Ship can mod there equicment to make it compatible with other races as to make em better prey to be hunted or equals to hunt together.
- Predators relay on there technology a lot. Its a strength and a weakness depending on the situation.
- There strength and jump height is extreamly impressive!
- Predators dont get disarmed fully. Should for any reason there emergancy wristblade gauntlet be removed fo a hidden trap stop there heart as to make sure a predator never become defenseless.
( known exception was ones to see the hole arm was removed/sliced off )

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Thanks a lot for the knowledge! I like to try and stick close to lore in my fan fictions, but leeway is sometimes needed for storytelling and saving hours of research. Either way, I appreciate the help, and will hopefully avoid any major conflicts with Predator lore to have a entertaining yet mostly accurate story.

so the predators gonna be all buddy buddy with the equestrians then?

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In a way.

He knows the ponies in general to be relatively weak creatures from his time on the planet long ago, and they basically worshiped him. Now, things are different, but they will help him in the next part of the story to earn his trust. They are also fighting against his common enemy of the Aliens. This makes them allies in his mind.

Long story short, they won’t be discussing past love lives, but they will get to know each other some as they work together to save the planet.

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It - will - be - GLORIOUS

Predator 》》》 (^.~)/)'(\(^-^) 《《《 Ponys
vs. Xenomorph (A)(L)(I)(E)(N)(S)

Magnificent chapter. Love the start. Reminds me of Doom 2016 were the Doomslayer awaken with incoming enemys.

I wonder if Fluttershy will be the translator or it can communicate on its own?

What is Discord doing? After all Fluttershy was in real danger...

In what time do this story plays? Its after the Twilight Sparkle castle apperance but that as good as it gets so far...

That a Elite Predator at the very least with that skill. This will be a most fruitful hunt indeed...

The Predator will have problems with energy... Unless he uses a mobil charger like in AvP2 pc game.

The Predator will probably need a day or two to recover from stasis, i hope there is some meat nearby to feed him? Plant roots will do as well since Yautija are omnivores.

Sooo... Any estimation how far the Infestation has evolved... Not going to lie... Earth got evacuated after a Xenomorph outbreak despite all there tech... Equis as a hole is pretty boned...

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Thanks for the feedback!

The story takes place a few days after the friendship castle is built. The story won’t cover any other events down the line in the tv series.

The infestation is pretty bad. The entire Crystal Empire has been overrun, and the aliens are near Canterlot.

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So the Crystal Empire population and the Crystal Pony got exterminated... Ouch...

This is a great crossover! Can’t wait to see what happens!

Don't know how I feel about this one need more chapters before I can rate it so I hope to see more chapters soon

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A lot of them (Crystal Ponies and the citizens) were able to evacuate or escape, but the Empire did get overrun—meaning a lot still died.

Hope you don't hit a writers block... I have writen a lot and sometimes have to jump to other of my storys published or not published to get back in the game.

Perhaps it can help you to :pinkiesad2:

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I have been writing my other fic on this site recently. I’ll probably jump back to this story after I finish up the next chapter or two I’m writing.

I try to stay close to the lore in my fan fiction, but sometimes a little bit of freedom is needed to tell a good story and save hours of research. Any way you look at it dordle, I appreciate the help, and I'll try to avoid major conflicts with Predator lore so that my story is fun and mostly true.

Do we get a update this year? :pinkiesad2:

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I wanna say yes… but I don’t want to say something and then fail to do it. There is a substantial amount of time left in the year, so I would think I could get at least one chapter done, but I have to get back in the mood for this story. We’ll see

11294965
I’m pleased to now say that you’ll be getting an update very soon.

**Hint: its in about an hour

Nice to see a update. I expected a modded AvP2 or 3 campaign. Lets see how it will run :pinkiehappy:

How are the suppose to archive exterminating all Xenomorphs? Once they get to Pegasus or Griffons they get flying forms.

Comment posted by Dracthul deleted Jul 15th, 2022

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It will be explained in time, but the aliens know the Predator is the greatest threat to them, so they will all try to get him

Many ways he can help:
1.- Call in other Predators. A Xenomorph Queen is the ultimate pride of any Trophy hunter collection.
2.- Orbital bombardment. Plasma fire from above.
3.- ... Not very... Surviver friendly...

Good hope to see more chapters

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It also possible that Yautia are either enemies of Jokeys, rebels or are one of their faction races. So they share enemies and ancient history with humans and with Jokey's bioweapon - xenomorphs.

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But keep one thing in mind, the Bad Bloods. They would do absolutely ANYTHING to get their claws on the queen’s head.

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Bad blood is the exception to this rule is my impression.

When is the next chapter?

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Still working on that lol. I’ve been finishing up writing projects and I’ve been pretty busy in general lately, but I hope to work on this again soon

U know if the Xenomorphs caught dragons for the Hive, I can easily imagine them looking like the Death Gripper Dragons from HTTYD The Hidden World. When u compare the Death Grippers with the Xenomorphs, u can see they both have a lot in common. They're both killers (one of dragons and the other of all life), they both breathe/spit acid (one flammable and the other highly corrosive), have a very sharp tail spike, and they both climb on any surface and move in a similar motion. If the Xenomorph Hive hatched from dragon hosts, they would definitely gain flammable acid like the Death Grippers.

David Sobolov as Drak’thul

Congratulations on your new book, any chance for a update on this story this year or maybe even two?

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Thank you! Honestly, idk because I’m very busy this year with school and trying to get some money flowing and stuff like that. However, there isn’t a whole lot left in the story, so it shouldn’t take too long to write it. No promises, but it’s possible within a year or two

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I hoped.for a longer story,but better than having is canceled due to time constraints good luck on your sales.
Stay snuggly :twilightsmile:

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