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Xiutik


I'm just really into shipping ponies with each other. They/them. Call me Tik.

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Pipp doesn't want to return to her old life, and, after everything that's happened, she doesn't think it's possible anymore. What does the future hold?

Audiobook version by The Mystery Fluttershy Fan: https://anchor.fm/mysteryponyfiction/episodes/When-the-day-became-the-night-by-Xiutik-e1a3h9u

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Aww that is a pretty nice short story and I really like the interaction between hitch and pipp and I had to admit I also ship them as well but anyway she is pretty terrified what's going to happen in the future but she'll never be alone with hitch and the others supporting each other nothing can't break them apart once again pretty good story keep up the good work

She did it. Sunny Starscout ended racism, after centuries of fights, and wars and downright alienation between the three races, she and her friends managed to save all that was lost, and by bringing back friendship, magic soon returned.

Dang! And we still don't know the real reason on WHY all of this happened in the first place?! Since this is supposed to be after Gen. 4.

Nice.
Rather short. But pleasing to read.

How sweet. I love pure character interactions like this. :)

There needs to be more to this.

Another brilliant little piece.

I do love when a pure character interaction scene is done properly.

Great work once again azularmz06.

Sunny Starscout killed the CEO of Racism :ajsmug:

In all seriousness, this is a nice read. Full of cuteness, too. Well done!

This was indeed cute but damn that opening killed me

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Umm... The racists in MLP I still know we're Sprout and Neighsay, so who's out?

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I wholeheartedly agree. Catch me refreshing the hitch/pipp tag on ao3 thrice a day. I eventually decided to write the fics i wish to read. I still wosh there was more though!

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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Nice. I like these lil fics.

Daww, that was a an adorable little exchange. I've read it out loud to record it as a audiobook, coming soon :).

✨This✨
✨Was✨
✨So✨
✨Dang✨
✨Good✨

I shipped them from the beginning, and you did the ship justice. You've earned a follow.

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Ahhh thank you so much! I shipped them from the moment Hitch looked at Pipp, too.
I'm so glad you liked it!

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Hold on. Hold on. Wait. Wait. Wait. 😭💝💓💙💖💓💜💘🌈🌟😍 i'm just sitting here imagining an animated video of Pipp singing this to Hitch now jfjakdkqlsnakdksjrjw
Thanks for the mental image ❤️✨

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Lol no problem 😊 I tried to find a couple of songs from her and then I saw this and I was like that's actually how she was saying for hitch

"Well bois, we did it. Racism is no more." -Skipper 2018

This was a fun read! Really enjoyed the 'aftermath' aspect of the movie and for highlighting a crossroads in Pipp's life. Pipp and Hitch? Hmmm....it's could work.:scootangel:

Inspired the narrative for my newest PMV :)

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Ohh this is great! I'm so glad my story inspired something so awesome, great job! :pinkiehappy:

I like this modest realization characterization for Pipp in regards to 'her old life', as you put it, and her willingness to accept maybe moving on. Pipp's portrayal in the movie was very polarized, with the first half really bold and underlining this very flighty, self-absorbed phone jockey stereotype. But once she got ousted from her kingdom (and fought with her sister), she really mellowed out.

That second half Pipp is the Pipp I see here. I hope we see more of that Pipp in the shows.

A cute oneshot! My sibling loving heart is distraught that Zipp opted for friend cuddles but not sister cuddles, but I suppose they'll come later. :pinkiehappy: For now the plot demanded it.

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I feel like Pipp's character development sometimes goes unnoticed because of just how many things are going on at once. I hope the series doesn't make her go back, and actually keeps that development we see in the movie. The way you put it, second half Pipp feels like a more genuine version of herself, and that's the one I'd love to see.

She did it. Sunny Starscout ended racism, after centuries of fights, and wars and downright alienation between the three races, she and her friends managed to save all that was lost, and by bringing back friendship, magic soon returned.

Huh... from the picture I thought this would happen during the campout scene from the movie... A well, gotta work with the pictures you can find (or do without, but it should work in this case).

With their newly returned magic, all ponies pitched in to help rebuild Sunny’s lighthouse. The pegasi had flown straight to Zephyr Heights as soon as they could, to share the good news, but the sisters remained. By dinnertime, the lighthouse was good as new, and the unicorns started walking back to Bridlewood, all but one.

Overthinking (a proud tradition among Bronies) :
It mildly annoyed me how fast Unicorns learned to use their magic in a dexterous fashion at the end of the movie. This goes even further, implying they suddenly acquired the knowledge of how to cast spells that could, say, fuse a broken part of a wall back into it. Twilight is a book worm for a REASON.

“I don’t want to leave you just yet,” Izzy admitted, as Sunny carefully hanged the repaired picture frame on its usual spot. “I know we’re done, but, what if you need help with something else?”

I think you want 'hung'.

Pip's character is kind, naive, curious, ambitious, and boyishly optimistic. Fully named Philip Pirrip, Pip's story is a classic coming-of-age novel, as it is a novel about maturity from childhood to adulthood. It watches Pip transform from a young bitlife, an immature boy, to a man.

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