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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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In six years time, a group of six friends had been utterly broken and scared. Three wore scars on their bodies, one bored a scar on her soul, and two now lay dead. And after everything that had happened, after old wounds were reopened, deepened, and filled with salt; it appeared as though a third mare would join the two in death.

But then, she stepped out of the shadows.

"Do not be afraid, my little pony. . .no matter what happens. . .friendship will always be magic."


My own Alternate Ending to Friendship is Tragic. The original was written by Vermillon, but this ending was more inspired by the audio drama version by Scribbler Productions. Although, this ending can easily fit on either version.

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". . .for everycreature else," Starlight said with glowing eyes and a demonic voice.

By the time I'm done with you, Starlight!

You would have wished you are imprisoned in Tartarus.

Because, I'm am now personally going make your pathetic existence a eternal hell.

RIP AND TEAR!!!

Please tell me there is a follow up to this? I need answers.

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That's the tragic part.
There are no answers.
There is only Starlight Glimmer.
There is only Equality.

HA! So someone else found the end to Scribbler's radio play unsatisfying too. To be honest, I think that is what Scribbler was trying to achieve, it is rather grim fiction, after all, though I'm not sure if it qualifies as a true Grimdark. Now I need to read the original to see how much was "canon" and how much was Scribbler.

Starlight trying to change time to bring about her "Equality" utopia isn't beyond the realm of possibility for pre conversion Glim Glam, and it lays the seeds if anyone wants to do yet another reimagined ending, something along the lines of...

"Dr. Whooves opened the door to the TARDIS and said to Derpy "Right, now lets go get that time lord wannabe who is majorly fooling around with the ponyverse..."

lol. :derpytongue2:

Anyway, nice rewind, it retains the tragedy of the original while making their deaths have a purpose, how ever unfortunate it might be. :pinkiesmile:

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No! Say it isn't so!

The unicorn opened her eyes and smiled the happiest, brightest, most sunniest smile Applejack had seen in a long time. Then she said, "What if I told you that I knew a way for you and your friends to get a better ending?"

She stopped herself mid sentence, then chuckled and said, "Oh, sorry. No spoilers. And sorry again, but I actually still have one last question." She cocked her head to the side questioningly and asked, "Why did Twilight wake up when she did? Why then instead of earlier, or later?" She turned to Pinkie's body and remarked, "Did she hear Pinkie calling for her?"

There was suddenly a tremendous flash, and all six ponies found themselves encased in crystal from the neck down.
"You IDIOTS!"

I'm getting Undertale vibes from this.
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". . .for everycreature else," Starlight said with glowing eyes and a demonic voice.

wow, what a shitty plot twist. everyone dies in the end, villain wins💀

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