Brony since beginning of November 2011. I live in England. I enjoy writing and drawing. Other than that i'm just a friendly ol' doormat.
Every night the sky is lit up by the many stars scattered over the vast space. Ponies look up at them, to make wishes, to relax. But one pegasus has a different reason to look up at them, for they are her goal. This is the story of her attempt to make the dream become reality, to be that one pegasus that reached the stars. Will this dream of hers come true or come crumbling down around her?
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... Did she get her cutie mark?
>Spoilers< ahead for those who haven't read it.
>>Shylyfly
No, she still has yet to find her talent.
Thanks for reading
Wow. This needs way more recognition. It was gorgeous.
>>Fluttershywriter
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
(Sorry I took so long to reply
)
Very cool, but somewhat sad ending. I really liked hoy your characters interacted with the mane six in a very belivable way. I think maybe Star recovered a little fast from "you won't be able to fly again", but maybe is just the initial shock. I see a theme on your writings ,trying to find oneself. You got talent, you need to develop it more so it's not wasted. Keep the good work!
I'm incredibly impressed how much complexity you've managed to develop in your stories in so short a time. You have a LOT of depth and development, here.
I look forward to seeing any new work you come out with, fella. You're doing awesome, you know that? :)
Just a quick note, before I fall asleep or anything, I started on this and reading it makes me smile. I like the scene-setting, and I think the theme is a good one. Sure, it's a common one, but what I've seen so far makes me want to see how you develop it.
And yes, as you mentioned, there are some grammar errors and such, but they don't take away from the story itself. Some feedback would helpyou find and fix those, and in the process, by practicing, you can learn what works and doesn't work.
In sorry, if you liked writing this, I think you should keep going, because it's a pleasant read!