Not many would chase after a Martian storm. But after a heated argument, all Fluttershy wants to do is lose herself in her photography. Unfortunately, it seems her motorcycle has other plans.
Entry for Bicyclette's Science Fiction Contest
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Not many would chase after a Martian storm. But after a heated argument, all Fluttershy wants to do is lose herself in her photography. Unfortunately, it seems her motorcycle has other plans.
Entry for Bicyclette's Science Fiction Contest
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Some of the ironic humor is pretty good, like how Mars is now portrayed on Earth for marketing purposes.
This science fiction earns the comedy tag...but it's too short. Should be longer.
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Yes, it would be interesting to explore more. But, I wrote this in an afternoon, I was just pushing myself to see if I could publish two stories in a day.
My other story, Diamonds in the Dirt, is much longer.
That's what you get for not being specific, Fluttershy!
As pointed out by another, this is brief (and I enjoy the brevity). It also competently covers/examines the subject/idea/emotion, which is its main job!
Thank you for posting!
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there's a fun irony in that, and i'm sure Martians on Earth have to constantly clear up misconceptions about what life is like there
aww, the AI understands the FlutterDash shipping dynamic!
now that is very Rainbow Dash
a very sweet and short fic, though certainly one that is hard to classify. a slice-of-life character moment in a slice-of-sci-fi setting? in any case, it certainly achieves what it means to do well. thanks for writing!