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When the Winchesters have nowhere else to go, Dean asks for Castiels help and they both get transported to a magical realm of friendship love and ponies. Ponies, seriously. Dean is back in hell, no worse than hell. He's in Equestria. also i didnt make this i found it on fanfic but i asked the author if i could post it on here :) all credit goes to simon. s. borderland

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when does this take place? i'm not caught up on the whole series... i think...

Even with 3 dislikes, I HAVE to give you a thumb up! Dunno if our train friends will come here, but I like this very much! The humor is good, I think that you can try to focus on the mane 6 just a bit more, to look more like a FiM fanfiction, but it's good anyway! Congratulations!:rainbowlaugh:

Looks like Sam and Dean, oops, I mean Doodles and Chevy Impala may have come at the right time.

I am officially watching this. It looks like things are getting GOOD!:pinkiehappy:

Thought I would give this A try since I like supernatural and MLP :D. I will tell yah what I think.

I like it, comedic and such, and now your mixing in docter who? my word.

guys i need a editor and a proof reader before i write anymore

CELESTIA: Oh, and Messrs Winchester? Try to keep the body-count low.

SAM: Um... How...?

CELESTIA: Castiel told me, of course! I wasn't going to let him drop off his charges on my world without getting my permission!

DEAN: So you're the local equivalent of an angel?

CELESTIA: Actually his boss and I shoot a round of golf together every month.

What! Suppernatrual without gore! :pinkiecrazy: hacks!

Sam and Dean meet the changelings and Shining doesn't like the Winchesters (that's no surprise.) Let's see how they react to Trixie.

I'm favorting and liking this story- you write Sam and Dean extremely well- in character. There are some flaws here and there- but for the most part, it's great. I'm really looking foward to how this develops. It would be interesting if some of the Mane 6 ever went back to Earth with Dean and Sam. Oh, and one last thing.

Like a lot of stories, because I'm a voracious reader, basically the only real problem I have with it is updates- and how short it is! Update more, and longer ;)

Keep on going!

That was one of the funniest things I have ever read. I a big fan of supernatural and this was just amazing getting to see Dean this way! MUST READ MORE!!:rainbowderp:

POST MORE I NEED TO SEE MORE!!:eeyup:

Ermagurd Winchesters in Equestria:rainbowlaugh::pinkiegasp::twilightoops::moustache::derpyderp2::derpyderp1:

Bobby? Shit just got srs..

Ohhhhh snap. Bobby is in for the taking. :rainbowlaugh:

I've been looking for a supernatural crossover all night, and so far everything's incomplete... :applecry: I HATE reading incomplete. But I'm reading this because I've been looking for something like it all NIGHT!

Doodles i cant i cant breath, im laughing so hard XD
not the best written story but wow did i laugh HARD XD

BOBBY?! shit just got real

wow i can only imagine his face at the names just going sighs
loved this story hope to see more of it soon! ^_^

So, you asked me for a review, right? This is a crossover fic, and I'm not familiar with the show, or anime you're crossing MLP, so I guess I'm limited to only checking your grammar, spelling and formatting errors.

As you've already read from my past review, the title needs some basic capitalization.

also i didnt make this i found it on fanfic but i asked the author if i could post it on here :) all credit goes to simon. s. borderland

You might want to separate this from the paragraph of the description. It's really bothering me.

Chapter 1. Title capitalization again. Pardon me, but seeing stories without any basic capitalization is a real turn off for me. Again, forgive me for being choosy.

"My Little Supernatural"

There's an option that allows you to center sentences while writing, or you could just type down the command yourself.

[gitna] [/gitna]

Replace the word 'gitna' with center, and then type in the sentence, or words you want to centered, in the middle. Why use the word 'gitna'? Fun fact: Because that's the word middle in Tagalog.

"Ponies, Seriously?"

That there is a comma, right? So no need to capitalize 'seriously'.

"Just trust me." Sam said as he and Dean looked over the town below.

This one needs some basic comma, and replace the period at the end of the dialogue with a comma, because if it is a said action, it should always end with commas.

"Hey, I'm a horse ain't I?"

Comma before 'ain't I'.

"I mean it's no double cheese but..."Sam sighed and started walking toward the town. "Oh, come on. What, you wanted this patch?"

You forgot to press space, after the first dialogue.

Half way down the hill though he tripped over his own feet and slammed into his brother.

Feet or hoof?

"Oh dear, Pinky Pie, you simply mustn't laugh at these two poor colts. Are you two alright?"

Pinkie, not Pinky.

"Hey, how you doin'?

You're lacking something in here.

Anyways, I lost the interest to continue, because I just remembered that I have tons of assignments to do. I recommend you, finding an editor to help you flesh out those nasty errors. So, good luck in the world of writing.

Castiel needs to be an alicorn end of story

Just one error that you need to fix is calling hooves "feet". Besides that I see nothing else wrong.

:pinkiehappy: Oh, look! It's Derpy and the Doctor! :derpytongue2: This story's great so far, keep it up! :pinkiesmile:

Cas is in this... :pinkiecrazy: This is amazing!!! :yay:

Omygosh, I'm loving this, I cant wait for the next chapter!:yay:

And then I read the story description...there isnt going to be an update, is there?:fluttercry:

4901029 oh they will be just you wait i know it6s taking awhile :(

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Oh...ok, I just assumed since you werent writing it... My bad. :fluttershysad:

4903563 oh yer should update that he gave the story to me now :)

Yep, that sounds like Dean. :rainbowlaugh: Doodles. Funniest. Name. Ever!

Looking good so far, I'm happy I got curious enough to actually find a Supernatural crossover!

Dean, as always, is acting like an ass. Ahh, I wanna see what'll happen when he sees that not everything is "girly". That, and when the ponies realize that they're not really called "Chevy Impala" and "Doodles"

:trixieshiftright: getting Twi to help make a fake badge? Nice one, Sam. Onwards to more....uh, Supernatural stuff!

"Yes I know. Agents Boulder and Gully,

Yeah, I know that's supposed to be X-Files, but uh.....for some reason It got me thinking about the matrix :rainbowhuh:.
and also, The Doctor? :rainbowlaugh: Nice! Yep, Dean would know that, wouldn't he? He watches too much Tv.

Oh goodie, the brothers meet Trixie!
aaaand I'm still listening to Daft punk......this song doesn't match Supernatural at all.

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did you not read the chapter with the dead body? Granted, it was very bloody, but still! Cutting open a body!

so, end of the world? Does that mean the four are gallavanting about? (Spelled that wrong.....)
and by four, I mean horsemen.

Oh? Cas didn't send them here? huh.

also, I'm just barely one episode past the demon gate and Dean having a year. I've no idea who Castiel is, aside from being an angel.

I just....can't stop reading! I'm so happy I found this, even if I have only one chapter left before the waiting game starts.

:rainbowlaugh: Still gets me laughing every time I hear Sam called "doodles".

Alright, I guess time to play the waiting game. I'll either go watch more Supernatural, or play some Corruption of Champions.

I just started reading it again and notified something shocking: no errors! anywhere that I could see! this story used to be chock full of them! good job getting an editor! I feel like a jackass for my earlier comment now!:twilightblush:

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well they did autopsy a corpse

BAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY:applecry:

I suposse this is not going to continue, right?

poor sam and dean, trapped in a world filled with rainbows and unicorns

dr. who and supernatural sqweeeeee

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