Rainbow Dash is one day randomly turning the pages of a comic (well, she is blind) when, all of a sudden, she gets pulled inside!... For about two minutes. A parody of the "Take On Me" music video. Rated "teen" because... Uh... Pipe wrench!
Don't mind me, I'm just passing through. I might stop to write a "comedy" story every now and again, but I highly doubt it.
Rainbow Dash is one day randomly turning the pages of a comic (well, she is blind) when, all of a sudden, she gets pulled inside!... For about two minutes. A parody of the "Take On Me" music video. Rated "teen" because... Uh... Pipe wrench!
Wait, what?
Umm...
Random Tag maybe? Oh and loadsa typos.
... What.
N- no, really. What the honest to God hell did I read?
Seriously? A-ha. And ponies. It- I don't-
Okay Internet. You win. I'm done.
tl;dr it was good but just out there y'know?
I don't know what to say. You managed to take a music video and effectively make fun of every part about it.
Good job.
this is just randomly funny
Wait if Dash could see in the Comic could Daring make her see in real life maybe not
A-ha!!! I found a good Fanfic
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You's a clever girl for that little play-on-words there, GFC. I bet you've been hunting high and low for a story like this. Maybe, maybe you have been, I don't know. And, uh... The sun always shines on T.V., I guess.
5937362 Naw, I was listening to A-ha when I was writing, and then I was like 'I wonder if there's any fanfics like this' lo and behold, i found one, and it happened to be good
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Anything in particular about this story that makes it good? It's fine if there isn't; I understand that some people have no reasons for liking the things they like. Heck, I'm like that sometimes. I just wanna know people's full opinions if they have it, and that ain't no crime, now is it?
5937618 I just like the idea, really, and the fact that it is well-written and doesn't have tons of spelling errors. The idea of using the plot of 'Take on Me' but with Daring Do and Rainbow is just cool to me :)