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Mr. Haze
I'm a brony. I love to write, read, draw. I was sucked into the MLP fandom by voluntary choice. I love these stories and I love making stories.
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You have my attention...
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Well well well....what do we have here?
This appears to be a very intriguing tale indeed. 
So far this fic is engaging and has me wanting more to read. While I have my predictability meter on high for this one based on the information contained within the two chapters presented. I will hold my breath in anticipation for the possible twists and turns this story may go in. Good work bro. Hurry with the next update....please
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Just noticed this. I really like the other lich story, so I immediately checked this out. And I wasn't dissapointed
Though I think all of this could have been avoided if those three didn't sell Twi out. Oh well, that's life. Or unlife, whatever
I'm pleased to see I'm getting so many likes.
I'll update this story as often as I can.
Ahhhh... another chapter that delves into the mind of an awesome pony that became demented with power.
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GAAAHHHHH TO DAMN SHORT! SO MANY QUESTIONS UN-ANSWERED
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Keep going.... I am super digging the perversion and purveyance to this twisted pony plot.
Can an American help a fellow European brony out here? It's about linguistics.
I've always thought that the word "Babe" (used as a lover's-nickname) is a very shallow and...frankly UNloving word. It seems to me like the sort of thing a teenager would throw at his/her current BF/GF, casually without much thought or meaning. Not something one would call his life-partner/someone he truly cared about. It seems...very colloquial and casual.
Am I completely wrong here?
Whenever I see it, My mind instantly associates it to concepts like "untrue" love/shallow relationship/casual/undevoted/flings/.
I've seen/heard it used by a few more respectable people to their partners as of late, so I'm beginning to think that I've been wrong all along. Can someone please clarify exactly what meaning and impact the word carries, so that I might realize my error and correct my ways?
Oh btw, this is in no way critique aimed at the author for Spike's usage of it to Rarity here. It merely served as a catalyst for my question.
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Wow... Umm... You know, I really didn't think about it that way. I was contemplating different nicknames (baby, sweety, hun, ect...) but I just stuck with 'babe'. Do you have any other suggestions I could use then? I didn't intend for it to be used as a superficial display of 'love'.
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In time my fellow brony all will be revealed. I'm trying to spread this story out so it's not just one chapter. Hence why I put it as 'incomplete'. I want to keep you guys captivated that's all.
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Hey bud you are right on both sides of the coin.....it all depends on how the term is used. For example... I personally have given the pet name "Bug" or "Buggy" to my wife....this has actually a double meaning. The first is the most endearing term as she is my "Love Bug" but at the same time when she is being unreasonable, it is a less endearing term as she is (at that point) "bugging" me like a pest. I interpret Mr. Haze's use of "babe" as a positive with no intention of belittlement. If we kind of think about the Spike from the TV show.... "babe" seems to fit the dragon's personality fairly well (at least in my mind).
Sorry I just felt I needed to throw that out there.
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Oh, it all depends. Hmmm, It'd have to fit Spike, and I agree with MyLilWolfy, it DOES kinda suit Spike's style.
Sweety is a tad too ...sweet (imagine that) and hun is something Swedish teenagers overuse all the time (I'm Swedish so I'm definitely biased against that word).
I don't know, it all depends on if it truly IS a shallow love-nick. If it's not, then continue using it. I'm more than happy to correct my view than to force you into breaking the flow of your writing. After all, this story is for everyone to read, I can't monopolize it. :)
Oh for Celestia's sake Haze!
Give me something other than a tease would ya! 
A few questions that come up that you may want to add in to previous chapters. How much older are the characters in relation to the original TV show? Is Spike in his teens now? How did the Princesses expire? (i am assuming that this will be explained later maybe?). Only other recommendation I have is to proof read your work....there are minor spelling errors that screw the flow of reading a bit. Other than that you got me hooked on this fic. 
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All will be explained in time. For the most part, yes, Spike is in his 'teens' and Rarity, Fluttershy, and Twilight are all in their late 20's. I know, I know, minor spelling errors. I try to get them all by reading it over at least three times, but even I miss a couple.
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I understand that brutha.....I did the same with my fic....and still missed an ass load of grammar......
MR. Haze! I am glad we finally get to see how the end to the Princess came to be.
BUT! WTF! that was so anti-climatic that I fell off my chair and almost broke a shoulder!....I mean come on...Twilight is going against the two DEITIES of equestria......the battle should have been WAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY more epic! You should have probably spent at least two whole pages on the fight with Celestia alone!
Next Problem: Proof read multiple times to catch mistakes like this: "The earth pony fell to ground fell to the ground while Spike stomped on its neck breaking". There are a few more errors such as this.
Take no offence I am just being honest and I believe brutal truth will help us to improve as authors, I also speak from experience on honest reviews (you should see the scathing review I got on my story from Tacitcalrainboom...he held zero punches!
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I truly enjoy reading this story and will continue to do so....I look forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you for your input, but I wasn't trying to make the fight scene ULTRA-MEGA-AWESOME-SUPREME-DEATH-MATCH. I was trying to convey Twilight's anger with the Celestia and how it fueled her to kill the sun god.
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Well.....that was well interpreted....the anger that is...... But still shoulda been epic! 
BTW: this is Twilight pissed off.
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I will be adding a much more epic fight scene later. I don't want to give out any spoilers, but I will say this, there will be blood.
Just a note to everyone who's reading the next chapter (chapter 7) contains suggestive notions of sex but no sex scene. So I don't want to see any comments about a lack of a 'sex' tag because I DO NOT do clopfics. Just not my forte. Thanks for reading everyone!
It's not clop if it's with a dragon....it's claw
Oh well wtf ever!.................keep it rollin. 
Another chapter! Sorry it's taken me so long. School has taken up a lot of my time as well as a family remember in the hospital, but I'm back now and I'll keep this story going until I think of a way to finish it.
I could have sworn that I favorited this... oh well, more chapters for me to read.
Though I must say, I'm a little bit confused here. Rainbow Dash said that Rarity and Applejack are dead. Applejack's the Dirt pony from the other chapters, so that's true. But Rarity's still running about with Spike... or are those flashbacks?
That could be an interesting plot twist.
Or maybe Rarity's dead but she doesn't know it
Anyway, I'm going to double-check if I favorited it this time.
Oh I'll be putting in a twist really soon. :)
man i hope you finish this story soon i hate waiting this was REALLY good
This story is now on Hiatus until I can think of where it should go. Sorry everyone. I just can't think of how I would like it to progress.