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xombiekilla


"The clever are not so much looking for loneliness as they avoid the fuss created by fools." - Arthur Schopenhauer

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This story is a sequel to The Legend of Equestria: Ocarina of Time


A legendary evil had awoken in an alternate Equestria for the hero and his new friends to fight. Twilight and her friends, plus Hero, with the help of Celestia, all work together to save Luna from her possessed madness. Will they be able to save Luna and this mirrored Equestria? Or will it be too late?

Disclaimer: This entire story was rebuilt from the ground up while trying to maintain its original details as much as possible. I worked very hard on this, and I did it all for the love of this community. I hope this provides a fantastic read for everybody, and I humbly await your feedback.

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Don't forget to add the sub-tag of Legend of Zelda.

At long last, it finally gets a dislike. This did have a flawless streak for at least a week before that, so I guess I got lucky. Shame for that because I’m putting everything I have into this story. Just understand that there was a legitimate reason why I have disabled ratings in my work; cause I just don’t go around pissing in peoples’ cornflakes as I feel that there’re better and more productive things that I could be doing with my time than that.

(I am tempted to disable ratings again and I’m tired of people asking why I do this when I have explained this multiple times.)

I don’t know about you guys, but do you know what I personally do when I don’t like someone’s work? I don’t read it; I skip it entirely and go find something I would like. That might make me crazy or stupid, then okay, I guess I’m both crazy and stupid.

But I just don’t feel that it’s necessary for me to attack someone’s work when I’m not the best, myself. I’m not better than anyone else and I don’t claim to be. Sure, I might have an attitude, and depending on how you look at it, you could call it justified. To me, disliking someone’s work gives me a gross feeling to do. And it feels like I would be personally attacking them and their skills as an author.

Why should I sit down and read something that I genuinely don’t like? I am a human, this means that I can choose not to read it and go find something else that I would much rather enjoy. This gives way to the phrase, “you can only win if you play the game; you’ll be loved for it, you’ll get hated for it, you’ll get nothing if you wait for it.”

Are you going to do any of the other Zelda games?

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Possibly, yes. I was thinking about doing the whole series as Hero being Link. But with a twist. In this story, it was designed to be parallel to Majora’s Mask; how would I go about re-designing a famous game in the style of MLP while still making it feel authentic? Needless to say, it is a bit of a challenge, but one that I’m honestly having fun doing. There shall be no spoilers, but the biggest twist will be about the villain himself, Majora.

Someone liked it, then revoked that like? There would have to be a reason, right? At least I would think so. What could be wrong with this story that doing this would become necessary? I am perplexingly confused. If you genuinely did not like the story, then all you had to do was skip it entirely, mate. I have said this before and I’ll say it again; I’ll never understand other human beings for as long as I’ll live on this planet.

I’m having trouble trying to figure this out. If I make a decision, I am not indecisive about it; once I make that decision, that decision becomes final. Even the Buddha loses his patience when insulted a third time. Right now, it’s at two, one more transgression and I’ll revoke the ratings on this story. Do not pass go, do not collect two hundred dollars.

Then the fun is ruined for everyone, I’m afraid. But I humbly believe that it should not come to this. That this is entirely unnecessary and uncalled for. There would have to be a very good reason for me to regress on my final kibosh.

Is it really too much to ask for some clarity or some transparency on such hasty and irrational decisions? I’m pouring every ounce of love I can into this, so it feels like I’m being attacked here. I do not appreciate that.

“Light... blue... beautiful...” She walked towards it like a zombie as Celestia and Twilight tried to stop her.

Crap. Looks like the aliens from Skyline are here.

I know that may not be the case, but I had to point that out.

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I did come a long way this time; I have worked hard to make this story the best I've ever written. I hope many people enjoy it.

"Well, what if we fly up high to check if we can find a way out of here?" Full of enthusiasm, Rainbow flies high to the treetops to scout the landscape from the skies. She looks around but finds that the air is dense and foggy. The air around them is unsettling, and they all begin shivering in trepidation at something unpleasant. "Okay, then. Skies are a no-go. Ponyfeathers."

This is pretty abrupt. When did the mane 6 join in?

Also for better context I'd suggest specifying that this was the 2nd or 3rd time Sombra was defeated because otherwise it comes across like Celestia and Luna beat him the first time and the mane 6 weren't involved.

I'm really digging the idea of keeping 'Hero' mute.

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Yeah, that was a deliberate choice. Link is a known mute, a man of action rather than words. Hero is technically a male, but he's intended to be non-binary, as his role partially serves as a placeholder for the reader and still his own character with his own origins and story.

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