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Some point out that knowledge of facts gets lost over time. Others say that those who keep records of time and knowledge don't always do a good job in the first place. And a few even go as far as to try and do a job that they claim to be better.

But at the end of the day, the results are always up to interpretation.

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Or, in straighter, more concrete terms, this is a collection of various retooled segments of parts of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic, Equestria Girls, assorted parts of the various IDW comic series, and other extended media elements, both with the intent of organizing events in a well-kept timeline and, in certain cases, retool parts of the official stories that may either be considered too objectionable in the official take or simply to develop something that happens to fit my personal taste better. Because in a sense, wanting something that canon didn't give us can be said to be the basis of all fanfic.

None of this is meant to convey that I find myself a better writer than any of the show writers in any way, nor am I claiming ownership of the series to any degree. Each official entry, no matter how I retool it, is still part of the official series, and I still respect the work that went into it even as I feel it has mistakes.

Also, if you happen to find an entry here that you liked in its original, official version, please know that my retool of it is not meant to be an attack on your personal opinions or feelings. We all have the right to like what we like, and at the end of the day, I can only say that I hope all who read these entries like them in the end. :)

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Note: The chapters as listed are ordered by in-universe chronological order (minus eventual flashbacks for each individual entry) rather than by the order in which I update them. However, unless I am writing specifically interconnected entries, and sometimes even then, each individual entry can, I feel, be read on its own. In some cases it will help to have knowledge of the source material, in others, the readaptation will be extensive enough that the adaptation will look like an independent entry, although full credit to the original source material will be given at least once per a given entry's revamp.

Also, as part of my 'timeline rearrangements' the order certain entries take place in as far as this AU is concerned will not be the order in which they aired or were published.

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Credit for the general format of this story goes to EchoWing and the format he applied to the collection Quiververse Bonus Reel for his Quiververse AU. My thanks to him for allowing me to draw from said format for the development of this work.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 12 )

So far, I think this is off to a very good start.

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Thank you for taking the time to comment. :) I'm glad you're liking it so far!

I don't think you have anything to worry about, this is a fantastic chapter. Well done.

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Thank you for the reassurance, as well as for the compliments. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

I definitely support all efforts to make the Guards more competent.

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Well, to that I can only say: I'm glad for the support, and I hope you enjoy my future attempts at that, and that they overall come across as 'believably balanced'.

Thanks for the comment!

Hey, no objection to the changes, especially if they establish some competency for Flash. Dude needs all the love he can get.

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Well, I won't disagree there. I may be fairly new to the fandom, but I can already tell he could use a bit more appreciation.

Thank you for your input on the changes. :)

As much as the guards are justified in feeling as though they've failed, I agree with their superiors - they did the best they could.

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Thank you for your input. :) I confess I found this a relatively tricky part to balance, given both that they had to fail for the sake of the story and that I'm trying to portray them as still competent in general (both Even Tide and Flash specifically and the guards as a whole), so I'm glad it did come across like they did everything they could and just happened to not succeed this particular time.

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Well... I know this is not the most pleasant answer to read, but to give a response to the main point, yes, I do plan to revisit this fanfic.

However, as I developed it further, I realized that I was a bit too hasty when it came to making the revamp of Equestria Girls part of this story, because of how ultimately extensive the needed changes turned out to be after I gave it some more thought. It really would have worked better if I had made it its own story from the beginning.

And unfortunately, this realization happened to coincide with a time when a lot of things with my life grew more complicated, thus cutting a lot into my time when it comes to working on fanfics.

However, I haven't forgotten it, and do intend to get back to it.

Promising I mean this as a genuine apology, I'm sorry for making you wait so long.

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