Cover art by MintyRoot (This is temporary as I make a new one.)
An errand in the Everfree takes a turn for the worse when Fluttershy is attacked by a rampaging hydra. Things only get weirder when she is saved from the beast by a mysterious giant, one she quickly learns has no memory of who he is or where he came from. As Fluttershy and the rest of the elements work to help this mysterious being they discover there is more to their world than they could have imagined as well as something far more ancient than Equestria or the Elements of Harmony.
Just a couple things to get clear:
- This is an alternate universe so there will be quite a few things different from canon, but the characters should overall be like their canon selves
- So there is no confusion on age, the Mane 6 are in their mid-late 20s and the CMC/Spike are in their late teens/early 20s. All other characters are aged up appropriately to match those standards.
This story is still my first attempt at serious writing (even after making a butt load of changes) so any and all constructive criticism is welcome
Arc 1: The Angel of the Everfree (1-11)
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This is a great introduction. Keep going!
Geez Red, stranger danger!
Say, isn't one of her wings broken at the moment?
I'm pretty intrigued! This is a good start and a wonderful story for someone still learning. Awesome work so far!
Hope to see more soon!
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Thank you so much!
Also thank you for finding that oversight, it completely slipped my mind a simple edit should fix it
Aaand that's the story of Rainbow Dash's Demise in a nutshell. Pissing off a tree god thing.
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Trust me you haven't seen ANYTHING yet
Can't wait to see what happens next
Welp, looks like ol' Skittles is in for a rude awakening!
Does this mean she's going to become one of the main villains later on?
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That is one of many possibilities
Wow, she really gave it to her! Daaaayum!
I'm invested in Seraphim Star's story now!
Terra:
Please tell me this Fic is still Alive!!
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Don't worry it is, a lot of irl things have been getting in the way but once they're dealt with I'm coming straight back to this
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AWESOME!! , and don't worry I know full well how life can get in the way of things. Patients isn't exactly my strong suit but I shall do my best and eagerly await more chapters