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This is a pretty good start to the fan fiction I'm looking forward to the next chapter
a male alicorn from the future comes to the past ... both a cool story and a really good one, I just hope it doesn't die in the beginning like 90% of the stories here on fimfiction.
i dont understand why there are so many dislikes, this is really great and i hope you keep going strong!
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I think you just jinxed it, all we can do is hope
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just a thing ppl have against male alicorn oc's
This is an interesting premise, and I kind of like how it just kind of jumps in to the story. So, I see the human tag, was Midnight human at one point, or was he a pony who volunteered for this? The way he thinks about some things seems to imply the former, but he also seems very comfortable being a pony.
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Story is based off the Alicorn King Cyoa, so yes Midnight was originally human. He was Summoned (isekai style) in the future timeline to help save the world. But by time they summoned him it was to late to save the world, as too much was lost to salvage said world. So summoning Midnight was more of a last big gambit to defy fate and change the future.
There will be future scenes (flashbacks) to go more into detail on his back story.
Please let me midnight be a father figure for Spike
Cyoa? Choose your own adventure? Wuh?
The CYOA
Oh yeah, "Hi Nightmare Moon, have fun ruling over a barren, empty wasteland in about a year!"
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Direct cyoa link
Character Build link
I searched for the CYOA you based the character's build off of, and I gotta say I'm impressed. It sounds like you've got a general idea of what kind of plot you want to have for this, when the CYOA doesn't really provide anything of that sort to go off of. You're being really creative with how you weave all of your choices together when others would just list them out, and because of that I'm really interested in continuing to read this. Maybe next chapter we can see what items the character has, haha.
Yo, this is really well done. The way you write characters is so advanced compared to how I've seen it done in the past. You took an entire chapter to write out an amazing and brief glimpse of how Pinkie's mind works and it didn't feel overdone at all. When I read this, the whole time I thought "yeah, now that's PInkie Pie!" and it was pretty funny to read through. Most other people would have just continued off of the previous chapter to get to the "cool" stuff, but you took the time to flesh out the character. Normally I enjoy stories that go at a faster pace, but I enjoyed this.
Ah, I see he's taking the "trolololol" approach with NM so he can make a lasting impression on the gathered residents of Ponyville and start building up some respect for being so bold. I hadn't thought of that; that's a really good idea. Hahahaha.
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I love the idea that no food growing never even occurred to her. Its kinda funny
i am rather interested in reading this but i think ill wait till there are more chapters
before i start reading this imma gonna do the CYOA(choose your own adventure) my self and see what i get though making a story based on the results of a CYOA is a SERIOUSLY good and interesting way of doing this it is on par with meeting the merchant but more creative in the out come though i really want to meet the merchant cause i got a specific item/items that could make for a interesting story and why don't people realize that the ability of the gamer is so broken that it puts gary's mod to shame in how creative you can get if you get it from from someone like the merchant and not Gaia i mean think of all the ways you can exploit the system of the world you are on stories like the game players and friendship is a Game are 2 good examples on some of the thing that can be done that not even the fucking web comic has thought of or even done i think i'm getting nutty cause i haven't for the merchant and don't say stop trying your will be trying to reason with insanity "i needed to rant that out" well lets get to it
rofl the first being he meets after coming to his senses is pinkie isn't that a huge random punch to the nuts and brain not to say pinkie is bad but the very first without prep pinkie is a world of random
wow a whole chapter on nothing but the interaction/conversation with one pony and nothing else never seen that before and it's pinkie i thought a talk with her would be more bouncy and fast pace with tons of random things happening not a straight forward talk with nothing happening i feel really weird right now
I was looking through the character build (before beginning to read the story) and noticed you didn’t specify what you choose for the perk godhood.
Sweet lord this is something different from wat you usually see on this site. I actually can’t wait to see the next chapter.
Plz don’t ever think about canceling the story.
What was the original site that this was posted on, and is it still on that site?
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Questionable Questing Forum, NSFW creative writing section. Will need to create an account to use said forums.
Chapters are up to date, as I plan to at least have 5-10k words posted a month.
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Thanks for telling
I don't think this went quite as planned, although even with his explanation I'm not sure what the plan was.
You may be captured midnight but you just made the advisor to Nightmare Moon you probably could use that to your advantage or you can go to plan B try seducing on she's been alone for a thousand years she might have that itch to scratch
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Plan failed successfully?
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Here's a picture of midnight, just got this commissioned a few days ago. This the non cutie mark version. Will update to one with cutie mark once it's been described in story.
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The art is amazing
Gonna need more chief
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Yeah all right ..thank you Lord in heaven.. oh jees... what are you gay
Talk to her and flirting with her works too you just got to stay calm
These would be a lot more enticing to read if the chapters were more than 1k words long.
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Sadly it's just the style of writing, since this is a cyoa (choose your own adventure) story. Meaning it's written by my bud chibi and I'm the player. I give him Midnight's reactions/choices to everything and he writes out how the character react to Midnight's choices. Basically think of it as a dnd type story.
You know, I’m pretty sure those flattering words came from the first trolls movie
This is the most interesting Alicorn OC story I've come across in a very very VERY long time. Can't wait to see where it goes next.
That ending lmao yeah I'm liking this so far
You know what? He ain't wrong.
Is this dead?
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No me and my (GM) Writer has had everything planned for a while but has been having trouble converting his thoughts into words. So currently he's working on a few other stories that me and him work on. We have 3 others stories that including alicorn King, so 4 in total. Hopefully we get some new chapters done in the incoming months.
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what other stories?
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The other 3 are non mlp related with 1 being a big crossover fused setting and the other 2 being both a multiversal type of story.
Hopefully I'll get a few new chapter posted soon for this fic. Edited in some art for this chapter.
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Please do! It's quite interesting and if I'm being honest, I am so incredibly tired of seeing fics with great potential lie stagnant, it sometimes feels like (almost) all of the good fanfics out there in the wilds inevitably end up cancelled or forgotten by the sands of time.