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WainbowHedgie


I'm a Brit who seems to enjoy writing and many kinds of stories.

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The siege of Canterlot is underway and the Praetorians are heading the battle destorying any and all resistance they face leaving lesser guards to cleanup the aftermath. Changelings all swarm the skies, quickly overwhelming Canterlot as they edge ever closer to victory. The streets of Middle Canterlot however prove to be a much harder fight.

One such Praetorian however is about to have reality dawn upon him.


Short story done on the spur of the moment. May adjust tags if needed but the Gore tag is there for a reason due to the start of the story. There is one instance of profanity, I don't feel it's enough to warrant the profanity tag however.

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Comments ( 3 )

little short and the ending's a bit abrupt, but the story was aight. Would've been much better if extended into a longer format, perhaps around 3-4 chapters? Would give the decisions here more meaning.

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Cheers for that, I do still need to work on my pacing.

Besides that I may go back to this and extend it a bit with some edits, I did struggle a bit on how I should go about ending it off.

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